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for Demon Beside Me

by writerperson44

schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really good! :D
person Jas
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update soon! please.
person may
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story! can't wait to see what happens next. i love KRAD! by the way.
i know is is evil but i can't help but love him. lol
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very great story and awesome last chapter! Can't wait to read more!
person may
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great update soon!
person jas
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loving this story, update soon! please
person jas
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great! i can't wait until i see what happens next! krad is really getting werid.
person jazz
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am happy that i can finally review. at first there was thing u had to be long in or something, but anyway. i love this story! i feel like i just feel minnie breathing. she feels so real to me. she makes me think about how most people want so badly to be popular. and krad man i wish i had krad in love me! or i think i do. can't wait to see how this all ends. its getting so good.
person Malika21
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
keep updating. I am interested to know more but ooooh, I don't like Kate.
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is different, a good different though.

I got kind of confused following your train of thought (due to typos) and it seems like you pieced this chapter together over time. I'd suggest going back through and making sure your thoughts are finished before going on to the next sentence ^^

If you want, I can proofread the next chapter for you (stories only get better with each new proof reading) :D

Can't wait for the next update!