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schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You can´t end now when something hot is going to happen and I won´t able to sleep out of curiosity :)
Why Keto doesn´t to want to have permanent relationship?
person tdorian
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh I like this !!! Keto and Dom are great characters and I can't wait to read more of this story.
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are so cruel for stopping right when Keto demanded for more sex at the end. Very cruel indeed. I hope there WILL be smexing to make up for the horrible cliffie.
person Le_Lethe
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! I really wanna know why he only has one night stands :) Oh, and Dom...so manly!
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...really great.
person knave
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this is really good!
can't wait to read more:)
person Jetfire
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOh what's gonna happen next? I can't wait to see. Its cool.
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start to a very sexy and interesting story, I hope you'll continue to update!
person gillie
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Good "lemon" scene. The first chapter that was not a chapter was a pain. Almost clicked away at that point.