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schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAWWWWWW...that was so friggin adorable! XD I loved it!!!
person tdorian
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm worried.9 chapters now, we Know so many things about Keto : his work, his freinds,his sex habits etc...and about Shadow/Dom : NOTHING.Who is this man really,is he dangerous.He is too good to be true.ahhhhhh...more it's too good !!! lol
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! A double update = awesome treat! I feel a little better and well-compensated. XD

And, sex-kitten ukes = WIN
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was a tease! Can't wait for the next update ^_^
person Jetfire
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You forgot me....*sniff*. I didn't get a reply, but I still really like this story, its brilliant. Can't wait for some nice lemon. Anyway short chapter is better then no chapter, is what I say. Thanks for updating so regularly.

Hugs Aduial
person tdorian
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
exclusives ? damn they're moving fast.I wonder how it will affect Keto's wrk since he is known to be extremely flirtly...update soon !!
person Le_Lethe
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
With Keto's night job, I wonder how protective Dom will get? Ooh, the possibilities! And how sweet, he's trying commitment :)
person Racine
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Doesn't mean to be mean or anything was wondering if Yuketo's name is supposed to be in relation to a Japanese name because if it is and you are wanting it to be pronounced Yuh-key-to....The proper romanji spelling is Yukito. Yuketo is actually pronounced Yuh-kay-to. Feel free to check a local book store in a pronunciation guide for Japanese if you don't believe me. I just thought I would let you know. And also to tell you that I like the story so far. Shadow is an interesting character.
person Jetfire
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL, snot like anyone ever says what's going to happen next, well He's propably going to have sex with the guy (bad boy). Anyway its really cool, I love your writing style, the way you take people into the story with you. It's like as if you're there watching it happen (and its very hot). I'm glad there's a good story between all the ones that leave a lot to be desired.

Hugs Aduial
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was one weird sandwich he ate. Will Niah make a move in the next chapter or two on Julian? Can't wait for more Dom ^_^