rate_review Reviews

it's really good.

Am happy Ash found love ^_^

Ah...I can't wait to learn more about Dom.I've loved the chat between Ash and Keto,kinda sad but at least it made Keto realizes he neded to know more about his lover.great chapter !

Oh good, and there was me thinking I'd missed reviewing a chapter...I was going to feel really mean, specially cause I check regularly. Anyway this is getting more brilliant with every chapter, especially that you have some serious bits in there but not too serious. And that Keto's actually not too happy about all the groping cause wouldn't have been good if he just didn't care. SO yeah pretty cool. I can't wait to find out more about Dom, he's a very intreguing man. And Hot....question is where do you find one of them.

Ah well, Looking forward to your next chapter.

Hugs Aduial

AWWWW...Dom's cute when half asleep. Ash's reaction was quite realistic. I did find it surprising that he was suddenly with Finn, since there was no hinting at that at all. Can't wait for the next chapter.

very cute! i like the sleepy Dom ;) He's very endearing. i also feel like niah is hiding something...he's sneaky sneaky

great smut chapter. A perfect combination of lusty sex and sweet lovin!

*flushed* that was hot!

Yay *hot* chapter. Pls write more about Dom. What is his job?

Ok...maybe I am blind...ups. Yeah anyway. I looved the lemon, nothing like a good sex scene honestly. I'm really interested to see where you take this, so I'll be watching for updates. Anyway I feel honoured for being first on the list *hugs*. I'm still undecided about who I like more Dom or Keto....hmm. Will have to think about that one. A bow for your brilliance.

Hugs Aduial