rate_review Reviews

AHHHHHH!!! It's OVER?!?! *sob*. This is one of the best stories I've ever read! I'm looking forward to see you continue your stories about the other characters!

Just started reading and I'm liking what I've seen so far.

One thing I noticed though, is that you very briefly switched to 1st point view, which is a HUGE no-no when you're writing in 3rd person.

"...But this wasn’t regular water, it was some imported shit with a popular label, and plus; the customers used our ice, our glass and our club space. So, of course we charged for it."

It was really jarring so you might want to fix it.

And now I'll continue reading!

Trinkie

hiyo, uhhm i was curious if you had a mailing list for your ficlets or if you did a mass email to people who wanted to know when you update...i woulda emailed you but... well... i tried to lol at least but it came back with 'failure to send' :( and aff.net >__> seems silly and doesnt have one of those 'alert me' like normal ff.net does lol if you did ^^ please email me at littleayeka@hotmail.com because that would be loooooverrrrly

Hum...I'd like to know about Dom's life before,like did he have a boyfriend before , who are his friends, what is his work etc...

Awww they are sooooooooo adorable. I love them. I love all your stories and am desperately waiting for updates and new ones *nods*. Though having to admit to struggling along myself at the moment. Can't wait till holidays i'm sure I'll get something nice done then. Work really kills teh imagination.

Loads and tons of huggins for you

Aduial

I swear! Ash and Finn are so cute together! At first I was leery since the two apparently had something going on when Ash cornered Keto behind the bar to question him about his relationship with Dom. I couldn't help but think 'Uh oh! Ash is stringing poor little Finn along as a substitute until he can get his hooks into Keto. Bad Ash!" But I'm happy now *sighs in relief* since apparently that isn't the case and the two are so lovey dovey and sweet! Oh! And I just love any chappy with Maxx. Yummy! I'm waiting anxiously for the story you mentioned with him!

yeah, i think you should end this story. i love those short fics that end on such a sweet and open note. it makes me feel like they have a whole life of happiness to look forward too. i really cant wait to read the niah and julian one. julian is just the cutest thing. i have a little baby brother named Julian and he's adorable so your julian always makes me think of my little Jewels.

aw...it's coming to an end already ? You know that Dom will remain a mystery for me.I'm gonna miss them two.Great chapter !

Hello! I'm really enjoying this story so far. I just found it today and I'm up to about ch.8. Keto and Dom are absolutely hawt! Holy bejesus batman! Well, actually all the characters seem pretty tasty! I just love it when the main character is kind of a twink with a serious penchant for a nice juicy, well, you know! I also like bartenders and Maxx is just yummy! I about drooled on the computer when Maxx and Ash did body shots on sexy little Keto. Mmm Mmm Mmm. Me next please! I'll be back later to finish up what you've got up and great story! I'm interested to see where it's going. Keto, you can run but you can't hide! I have a feeling Dom won't let you get away for long!

Yay *does little dance* awesome, they are sooo sweet. Bags I Dom! I want one. Anyway still aint got them drawn, have however done ash and fynn and niah and julian.....though not happy about niah yet, send them to you too. But since your email is buggered you probably haven't seen them yet. Anyhows, can't wait to see the last bit...its good you dont want to write boring filler stuff.

Huggins! Aduial