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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 11
hhahaha XD why'd you keep changing their eye colour? so funny of you XD
it's okay, just as long as you keep writing 'finn's rose eyes' or 'Dom's cerulean eyes', the idea will stick in our heads better ;)
hhahaha XD why'd you keep changing their eye colour? so funny of you XD
it's okay, just as long as you keep writing 'finn's rose eyes' or 'Dom's cerulean eyes', the idea will stick in our heads better ;)
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 12
O_O that was a whopping load of information freely given...
i thought at least one of them would be a bit wary about sharing and baring it all...
but hmmmmmmm~
seems like tall dark and sexy over here has a set of brains and skills to match!
how smart is keto on the other hand? he never mentioned anything about academics. XD
O_O that was a whopping load of information freely given...
i thought at least one of them would be a bit wary about sharing and baring it all...
but hmmmmmmm~
seems like tall dark and sexy over here has a set of brains and skills to match!
how smart is keto on the other hand? he never mentioned anything about academics. XD
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 13
oh, I'd like an email alert please, for this story. (thou at this point of time, I'm trying to remember if this story has been completed already or not. XD)
haha! that's what I get for being a 'late' reader. *shrugs* As long as I found your story, good enough yea? XD
Anyway, does Keto bruise easily? shouldnt be that bad yeah actually? I don't know... or maybe just cause he's fair eh~ *shrugs*
oh, I'd like an email alert please, for this story. (thou at this point of time, I'm trying to remember if this story has been completed already or not. XD)
haha! that's what I get for being a 'late' reader. *shrugs* As long as I found your story, good enough yea? XD
Anyway, does Keto bruise easily? shouldnt be that bad yeah actually? I don't know... or maybe just cause he's fair eh~ *shrugs*
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 15.
gah! it's ending soon??? *sniffs* aaah well... *sighs*
I wonder what else is in store before the end.
gah! it's ending soon??? *sniffs* aaah well... *sighs*
I wonder what else is in store before the end.
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 16
awwww. the secret's let out. with no surprise... oh well... i guess the last chapter will be a surprise then~ ^_^
awwww. the secret's let out. with no surprise... oh well... i guess the last chapter will be a surprise then~ ^_^
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 17.
gah....
ITS THE END!!!! *sobs* 17 chapters... somehow, it feels short-lived ... maybe because the last story I've read was around 60 chapters long... O_O
but hmmm yeah..... it was great while it lasted... *sighs* yep, twas great while it lasted.
but still... IT WAS SHORT LIVED!!!! I'm gonna see what else you've got to offer on your profile...
;) catch ya laters MiriuOniaya
gah....
ITS THE END!!!! *sobs* 17 chapters... somehow, it feels short-lived ... maybe because the last story I've read was around 60 chapters long... O_O
but hmmm yeah..... it was great while it lasted... *sighs* yep, twas great while it lasted.
but still... IT WAS SHORT LIVED!!!! I'm gonna see what else you've got to offer on your profile...
;) catch ya laters MiriuOniaya
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i realised i didn't have a review ready for chap 14.... i wonder why...
O_O oh well~ *shrugs*
I'll leave ya a review hit here for it ;)
you should, at the very least, get one review per chap for this, from me =D
O_O oh well~ *shrugs*
I'll leave ya a review hit here for it ;)
you should, at the very least, get one review per chap for this, from me =D
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE SOOOO AWESOME (wanted to read this last night but was thwarted by babysitting duty darn it). ANYWAYS WOHOOO HUGGLES AND HUGGINS AND AWWW AREN'T THEY CUTE. *squeels and does little dance*. Since you are sooo awesome you don't need to apologise for being late.
I want Dom for myself...or Maxx can I have him?
I want Dom for myself...or Maxx can I have him?
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little sad we're at the end.I'm gonna miss them.Thanx for this beautiful story ! A(aida.traore@yahoo.fr)
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i feel like its not really ended, like it just doesnt seem like that should be the end i mean it seems almost like a cliffhanger with him asking to move in....