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Romance is always good with the strain of war to flesh it out. I really hope this is continued. You've a way of drawing the reader's attention right in.

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OMG, I SO did not see that coming! I'm still crying over this chapter. So moving, so eloquent. I am so sad for poor Bart. I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter. Now, no more Rocky Horror, write, write and write!!!! (J/K)

Noooo!! Poor Bart, I can't imagine what that would've been like >_<

Chapter 3
ahh, what a nice surprise waiting in store for me after doing all my crap essays.wohoo! great chapter! im so glad nate has met his future loveeeeer! bart sounds like a hotty. and awww the last lines were so cute "i like brown eyes." shweet. i am looking forward to the development of barts and nates relationship, which shall hopefully lead up to some hot man smex. -.^ and yeah titanic makes me cry everytime too. i just finished watching it 5 mins ago and cried some more. excellent.

i shall patiently wait for ur next update! NO PRESSURE, TAKE UR TIME! -(no plez dont):)

I am SO loving this story; great start!! I'm anxiously looking forward to an update!

Wow..What a name! Bartholomew Myer. I like him already!! I'm sad I didn't get to review the other chapter but I love how you showed Nate as an old man, telling a story. It just make it that more realistic.

wow, im looooooving this so far! great writing! already i cant wait to see what happens! but pooh, theres only 2 chapters so far! sniff* i cant wait till u upload more! i really enjoy stories that revolve around wars, and i love how nate is british! :) wohooooo isnt there any way to fave stories on this site? i really want to fave it. sigh!

TEHEE!! for some lunatic reason i couldnt stop thinking of titanic. lol. i think its to do with the old people. ha. but dont worry, im not saying i think ur story is like titanic, thats just craaaaaaaaazy!soooo second chapter i liked very very much! it sounded very...erm...professional? i guess u could say (mature? basically, GREAT!). im dying for the next chapter. DYING!!!! i shall check the site everyday to see if u have uploaded! :)

Hi! I loved what I've read so far and can't wait for more. Historical slash, especially WWII era, is my favorite. Although it's, sadly, hard to find. If you're ever looking for a beta, whether you need a new one, or just an second or third set of eyes, let me know. :) Keep up the awesome work!