rate_review Reviews

Thanks for the update. This is a great story. Mac is hilarious. Jamie is right. Mac is a total pushover when it comes to Jacob.

Ack, noo, Jacob, stop kissing Mac! >.< That's very very bad! Poor David :( And Mac can't be hated - he's the main character! ^_^ Ha ha. I hope he doesn't go too far with Jacob... Because again, poor David! I can't wait to see what happens next! :D Please keep up the great work ^_^

Oh lordie. Trouble's a-brewin'! I wish I wasn't starting to like Jacob. He's a cheating, selfish son of a bitch but... something about him is likable. I think I'm just as silly as our protagonist! I so want to know more about this Wyatt bloke. Keep up the good work. I'm patiently(yeah, right) waiting for the next update!

this is an awesome story cant wait for another chapter
can you email me when you update?
stories@brootalz.com

Welcome back! I missed this story! I was reading your A/N and I kinda disagree about Mac. I really like him. Maybe I disagree w/how you think he is b/c I see a lot of myself in him. I was never one to say no and I could see myself doing what he's doing just b/c he's enamored w/Jacob. Now, Jacob is the real asshole. So.....he was testing Mac or testing himself when he gave him a massage and kissed him in the hallway? Was he trying to prove to himself he wanted David to move in w/him. OMG, I just got it! He's using the pretense of having David move in w/him so he can have more freedom and see Mac; is that it?????? What a scumbag! Did you have to make him so gorgeous tho? It's hard for me to hate characters who are really good looking! Hahahah Looking forward to the next chapter! Have a great 4th!

Is it wrong to address one of your readers? Munez, I'm having withdrawals from my Jacob fix! J/K (not really)

I LOVE this story!! OMG, Mac is hysterical! I was cracking up when he told Jamie about him and Jacob and she fell on her ass! OMG, priceless! This is a great story, update soon please, please, please!!!!! Your writing is so good and humorous! I can't wait to read more!

Lisa

Yeah, Davis'd not so evil in this chapter, where as Jacob very definitely is. Using Mac like that... :( Poor Mac *pets* even if he did kiss back, ha ha. But, he's the protagonist, he has to be liked! XD Aww, David's so excited, bless him. He he. Please keep up the the good work! ^_^

Yes, everyone generally has a hard time with my name X'D But hey, it's ok to be little OCD. We have a little in all of us, heheh. Mine is correcting grammar mistakes in speech or writing when I can find it X3 My friends characterize me by that OwO;;;

Agh! Poor Mac, I would hate to be in his situation. Masochism sounds quite lovely...but not if Mac is going to pity himself over it o 3o;; His timid character is quite adorable, though. And I stay at a loss for words at Jacob's jackass-like behavior >.< I really want to get into his head to find out why he's being so hot, unattainable, and cruel.

Loved the conversation between Mac and the fag hag, Jamie. I'm the most vulgar person I know, and even I don't talk to people like that XD Comic relief has it's uses 8D So, thanks for updating! Even if the next one isn't fast, I'll try to last. HA that rhyme was for you C:

Hurray; an update! I love this story. So now that Jacob's having David move in with him, how will he have contact with Mac? Then again, I guess it would be easier for Jacob to come over and do whatever he wants without having to look over his shoulder for Geisha. Crafty bastard. Mac, I know hot guys are crazy, but you can do better. Jacob is a creepy. And... I like him, too so I'm just being a hypocrite!

Looking forward to the next chapter. And, uh, Judge Judy is a guilty hobby of mine!