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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha lol thats hysterical,
poor Seth!
Seriously Jay keeps getting funnier and funnier AND more interesting.
Im so totally stupid, I just realized that I recognised that accidental chapter eleven you put up
Then I realised that I actually read three of your fics and they happen to be among my favourites LOL small world!
So I shall start reviewing them too!!
You really are talented at writing, your fics are really imaginative and the characters are mysterious and interesting making you want to read more and more until you find out everything about them!!
Lol that was a mouthful ... anyways I loved this chapter and I can't wait till the next one.
Keep up the great work!
Sorry for any bad spelling!
poor Seth!
Seriously Jay keeps getting funnier and funnier AND more interesting.
Im so totally stupid, I just realized that I recognised that accidental chapter eleven you put up
Then I realised that I actually read three of your fics and they happen to be among my favourites LOL small world!
So I shall start reviewing them too!!
You really are talented at writing, your fics are really imaginative and the characters are mysterious and interesting making you want to read more and more until you find out everything about them!!
Lol that was a mouthful ... anyways I loved this chapter and I can't wait till the next one.
Keep up the great work!
Sorry for any bad spelling!
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Thank you Greggy for making us have this much fun! XDDD
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
alright they have an agreement! Jay gits to torture Seth, yay! :D I liked all the confusion in their conversations, that was fun :P Thanks! :D
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh so funny! Jay is so manipulative :D Poor Seth *snickers* XD can't wait for more torturous fun! :D
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. Jay is such a cute character. I have to agree with him. I would want to go flying too. I like his plan to torture Seth but I hope it backfires. Those two need to start touching each other.
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Make him do something! I finally know that Seth is gay and that it looks like he has his eyes set on Jay.XDD I can just picture Seth with wings! I like this story more and more. ;)
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol Seth is bipolar and totally jealous :p That's so cute! and now he has bait for Jay! Jay and all his weirdness couldn't possibly stay away now, not with the prospect of flying :D And Seth finally threatened to molest him! yay! cant wait for more! :P
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEAL*
I love this so much,
it just keeps getting better and better
its going to be one great ride!
im so excited for the next chapter, you are really talented.
ps. i think you just uploaded the chapter ten for another of your fics as chapter 11 for this one.
anyways CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER
YOU ARE FREAKING AWESOME!!
I love this so much,
it just keeps getting better and better
its going to be one great ride!
im so excited for the next chapter, you are really talented.
ps. i think you just uploaded the chapter ten for another of your fics as chapter 11 for this one.
anyways CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER
YOU ARE FREAKING AWESOME!!
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is for chapter nine, I didn't get a chance to review it before :P I like how Seth kinda seems to think Jay is an idiot, its funny! Then Jay seems to think the same about Seth at the same time! That's great :D I love how clueless Jay is, he's so spacey, he's constantly in his own little world in a way lol I'm like that so it makes me happy :D Thanks for writing!
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... Yeah... eventually they'll end up in bed... I hope it won't take too long. XD I'm really curious what Jay will think when Seth takes him to bed. XDD And I love the ice cream part of this chapter! XD I lso never would have thought that Jay is such a masochist. Seth told him that he wants him and he makes a deal where Seth can't touch him! I'm staring to think is Jay really has some issues. ;)