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Lovely as always, keep up the good work!

falling in the mud.. laughing - why would Seth want Jay- maybe for the laughs.

Jay Jay and Blue Jay- What an evil mother bird. I can't wait to see who cracks first - Seth or Jay. Jay seems to be getting hornier by the minute.

It's not chapter 15... Before I read your note before the chapter I thought that you actually made a mistake or even post not that chapter that you should but since everything is all right then i can say that I enjoyed this chapter as much as all the others. XD And I'm waiting for more (like always). ;)

Blue Jay, what a good name! I think if I ever have a girl I might consider that name :D So when Seth gets to do whatever he wants to Jay he's going to bite him he he he :D I love Jays thoughts, so much fun :P Thanks for writing! :D

Just like I said on 'The Music of the Demons', you update fast O_O Sometimes I can't keep up XD One time I read a chapter and then BAM!! 2 new chapters appear >< But its good lol

This is something I been thinking for a while now but.....Jay sure has only one think on his mind lol Kind of proofs the thing everyone says about guys, only one thing on their minds lol But the chapter was good. We learn more about Seth, and about demons. :D

Until the next chapter then :3

I was sceptical at the start of this, I'll be honest. I don't like stories where people think it's adorable to be 'random' because most people who attempt that can't pull off that kind of zoned-out character and the story just ends up to be completely and utterly stupid.

But I'm glad I continued reading, because that's not the case with this story. Jay is adorable, and while he really does have a messed up mind, it's believable and it works with the story. I like how you've paced this and written the demons as well. It's all very intriguing. I'm looking forward to more!

oh it's evil, EVIL, but its so much fun! :D Seth is so cute with his pink face from having an erection :) I think Jay is the one with less control though, he was humping Seth :D I wonder when someone is going to jump the others bones hehe :D Thanks!

I love Jay´s way of thinking.

:O Sorry I didn't review last time >< I forgot :S And on Friday I don't turn on my laptop, so I don't read or review :(

But anyway, the chapters were great! >< I really can't wait for more! I want to know what more happens between them XD