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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sorry yea I meant Greggy :P Thanks for writing it was again very funny :D The part where he said he was a full grown idiot made me laugh a lot :D also, YIPPEEE!! They finally had a sexual encounter! lol I cant wait to read more I'm excited about their competition XD
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how long will Jay hold himself back. XDD I'm waiting for more! I like this chapter. Seth is sweet. ;) I feel sorry for him for desiring Jay. XDD But I like Jay too! (In some weird way). I hope you'll give us more chapters soon!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was really GOOOOOD! >< It got really interesting XD Can't wait for the next one! :D
And yeah, the one mind track thing does work XD
And yeah, the one mind track thing does work XD
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why I like Gregory. I always like villains. I think as soon as they're evil, I like them based on that alone. Unless they're the annoying variety of evil... But so far Greggy is just amusing.
I was surprised they actually did anything! Anger is one hell of an aphrodisiac! As for Seth being a virgin... I'm surprised, too. Not that it's a bad thing. They can learn together! Or something. Either way, Seth seems to be born gifted if that foreplay was anything to go by.
I was surprised they actually did anything! Anger is one hell of an aphrodisiac! As for Seth being a virgin... I'm surprised, too. Not that it's a bad thing. They can learn together! Or something. Either way, Seth seems to be born gifted if that foreplay was anything to go by.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
EEEEE! That was great! Smexy. Veeery smexy, deary. 20 points for that.
I don't like Greggykins. He's not nice.
I totally think Jay will crack first. I'll laugh when that happens. That'll be funny.
Seth can't bottom. No way. That would be WAY too weird....
I don't like Greggykins. He's not nice.
I totally think Jay will crack first. I'll laugh when that happens. That'll be funny.
Seth can't bottom. No way. That would be WAY too weird....
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think Seth will be stopping the car again after this episode. Jay deserves to be punished.
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was really good! I really want to know what happens next. ><
I was really surprise when you said you didn't know about the one-track mind thing >< I thought you were doing it on purpose...O_O.... XD
Well, until the next chapter then. :3
I was really surprise when you said you didn't know about the one-track mind thing >< I thought you were doing it on purpose...O_O.... XD
Well, until the next chapter then. :3
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oops, missed that last update.
Jay Jay... Ha. That kid is such a spazz. Has there been a real physical description of him, though? Other than being short...
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update. I don't know why, but I actually like Gregory! It's funny how he always appears whenever Jay decides to run from Seth.
Jay Jay... Ha. That kid is such a spazz. Has there been a real physical description of him, though? Other than being short...
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update. I don't know why, but I actually like Gregory! It's funny how he always appears whenever Jay decides to run from Seth.
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jay must be one of the craziest characters I've ever read about, like EVER! And I can't seem to help it but adore the little loon! LOL
Please, please, hurry with the next chapter! I just can't wait to see what more crazy stuff he'll do next. Or if he'll succeed in driving poor Seth crazy too. XD
Please, please, hurry with the next chapter! I just can't wait to see what more crazy stuff he'll do next. Or if he'll succeed in driving poor Seth crazy too. XD
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my that chapter was really funny! good job! :D Gabby is back! Can't wait to read more :D