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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter!! XD I thought ''jazzed my pants'', was pissed my pants O_O I got it now >_< That was why I thought it was weird that he didn't say he had pissed his pants >_> I'm really slow....>< XD Well anyway, it was a fun chapter :D
About the songs, well, I really never hear her songs, it was just that my dad turned on the radio and a song came up, and I thought ''ummmm....that voice is familiar....''. And well, it was Womanizer XD But I haven't heard it again...But its not bad.
Oh! About the zombies. My brother bought a guide from Amazon.com which I think it was called 'Zombie Survival Guide' XD The guide was and wasn't serious. The way it tells you how to survive its serious, but of course, its not real (I think not...), so its like a joke or something. I really don't know how explain things... One of the things that says its not to take a flame thrower because: 1) Its heavy, and 2) it needs gasoline to work, and when trying to escape from zombies, you don't have much time to look for gasoline >_< Just like a chainsaw, but this one makes noise so it attracts zombies. I really need to read it, sounds cool :D
Well then, until the next chapter then :3
About the songs, well, I really never hear her songs, it was just that my dad turned on the radio and a song came up, and I thought ''ummmm....that voice is familiar....''. And well, it was Womanizer XD But I haven't heard it again...But its not bad.
Oh! About the zombies. My brother bought a guide from Amazon.com which I think it was called 'Zombie Survival Guide' XD The guide was and wasn't serious. The way it tells you how to survive its serious, but of course, its not real (I think not...), so its like a joke or something. I really don't know how explain things... One of the things that says its not to take a flame thrower because: 1) Its heavy, and 2) it needs gasoline to work, and when trying to escape from zombies, you don't have much time to look for gasoline >_< Just like a chainsaw, but this one makes noise so it attracts zombies. I really need to read it, sounds cool :D
Well then, until the next chapter then :3
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April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed but I'm here again! I liked the story about him finding the book in Blue's room and learning about her fetish :p It's funny thinking about a gay guy having a yaoi lover as a sister and having her tease him about it, I kinda want a gay brother now lol :P
The masturbation show they put on for each other was awesome :P its funny that Jay was the first to crack and run away :D Seth used to be the one to get all flustered but now that he knows Jay reacts too he's totally in control almost he he he poor jay :P
That little snippet about them misunderstanding each other about flying was funny, they completely missed each other! that happens to me all the time so I find it to be really funny lol and Jay was so excited to fly and then he finally gets to and he's too scared to open his eyes! hes such a spaz....its so great!
Seth was such an evil mastermind dry humping Jay against the tree and not allowing him to win lol evil genius he's turning out to be!I like it! I think Jay is losing their competition lol I can't wait to see how he's tortured next! Thanks for writing! :D
The masturbation show they put on for each other was awesome :P its funny that Jay was the first to crack and run away :D Seth used to be the one to get all flustered but now that he knows Jay reacts too he's totally in control almost he he he poor jay :P
That little snippet about them misunderstanding each other about flying was funny, they completely missed each other! that happens to me all the time so I find it to be really funny lol and Jay was so excited to fly and then he finally gets to and he's too scared to open his eyes! hes such a spaz....its so great!
Seth was such an evil mastermind dry humping Jay against the tree and not allowing him to win lol evil genius he's turning out to be!I like it! I think Jay is losing their competition lol I can't wait to see how he's tortured next! Thanks for writing! :D
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April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...And then I jazzed, in my pants.
Heh. That's kind of catchy! Well, Jay finally got to fly! Poor Seth, I can't blame him for getting randy while flying with his... uh... love interest? in his arms. It'd happen to anyone! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Heh. That's kind of catchy! Well, Jay finally got to fly! Poor Seth, I can't blame him for getting randy while flying with his... uh... love interest? in his arms. It'd happen to anyone! Can't wait to see what happens next.
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Jay finally gets to go flying. I had to laugh when Jay ran to the bathroom. After Seth already sucked him off once! That was too cute! Looking forward to more sizzling scenes from both of your couples.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was funny!
Personally, I think I would have stayed and watched Seth, rather than hide out in a bathroom. HAHA!
Personally, I think I would have stayed and watched Seth, rather than hide out in a bathroom. HAHA!
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jay Jay. So sexually frustrated. Blue would probably have some words of wisdom that he'd never want to hear for his little predicament. The more he talks about her, the more I like her. It's nice to see they've got such a close, realistic relationship.
I wonder where Seth wandered off to... I was hoping he'd still be knocking around somewhere so he could pounce Jay and molest him. Ah well. Looking forward to the next chapterrrr.
Ha, my captcha is 'Unicorn Stoll'... I don't know why, but that brought me great amusement so I thought I'd share.
I wonder where Seth wandered off to... I was hoping he'd still be knocking around somewhere so he could pounce Jay and molest him. Ah well. Looking forward to the next chapterrrr.
Ha, my captcha is 'Unicorn Stoll'... I don't know why, but that brought me great amusement so I thought I'd share.
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A chapter! YAY! I'm so curious what will happen next. Will they see Gregory again? Will they have sex? ;) And what with the neck? I can't do anything else, just wait for your updates so I'll try to wait patiently. ;P I really like your writing.
P.S. I hope you'll have time and muse to write about Kaden and Dean soon. ;)
*huggs*
P.S. I hope you'll have time and muse to write about Kaden and Dean soon. ;)
*huggs*
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gosh I'm loooooving this story! XD
The relationship between Jay and Seth is just so... hot... and weird... and hot!!!
I love the way he's toughts are just so... all over the place... and totally crazy... and completly accepting of the fact that he's gay, and even tho he just found out he's only worry is to jump Seth's bones and get laid!!! LOL
It's hillarius!!! XD
The relationship between Jay and Seth is just so... hot... and weird... and hot!!!
I love the way he's toughts are just so... all over the place... and totally crazy... and completly accepting of the fact that he's gay, and even tho he just found out he's only worry is to jump Seth's bones and get laid!!! LOL
It's hillarius!!! XD
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was good, like always. :3 Jay really is funny XD I laughed when he said ''I want to sleep. In a bed. With Seth. Naked is optional.'' XD I really like moments like these. lol
Until the next chapter then. :)
Until the next chapter then. :)
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I was not expecting Seth to do that. Hip Hip Hurray! That was much better than any spanking for sure! I like their new arrangement. I can't wait to see who trips up next.