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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was so good!! >_< And I loved the end, what Seth said. :3 It was cute. With each chapter I like this fanfic more and more.
Until the next chapter then ^_____^
Until the next chapter then ^_____^
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, how cute and smutty. I think I enjoy this story more and more with every chapter. Great job, keep it up.
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now, you see, Jay? This is why you don't give a blow job to a guy that isn't even conscious, because stuff like this happens.
...Okay, maybe not stuff exactly like this, but you get the point.
...Okay, maybe not stuff exactly like this, but you get the point.
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow how I wish this story wasn't just fiction and Seth and Jay really existed!
and then I would wish to be a fly on their wall!! XD
free access to hot smut and entertaining discussions daily. I'm pretty sure I would never grow bored again! lol
god I love your imagination Babby! please keep giftings us your great stories. ;)
I'm anxious to see what happens next. update update update!!!
and then I would wish to be a fly on their wall!! XD
free access to hot smut and entertaining discussions daily. I'm pretty sure I would never grow bored again! lol
god I love your imagination Babby! please keep giftings us your great stories. ;)
I'm anxious to see what happens next. update update update!!!
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know how hard writing sex scenes is, but I think you did a good job! It was hot. As for them being mates, oh boy. Of course, I think it's fantastic. They'll come around eventually... *coughs*
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Babby if this story ends I hope you will do a sequel because I really will miss Jay. He is so cute and naughty. How could he tease Seth like that while knowing full well exactly what Seth was thinking? I know he is afraid to take that big step forward (even though it is all he thinks about. I hope he will take some pity on Seth next time (or that Seth catches him in the act). Keep up the good writing. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seth. XDD You're so mean for him! I hope you comes and sees Jay and Jay will break. :) It would be sooo good! XDD I can't wait... unless Jay changes his mind and won't do anything. XDD He's unpredictable with his way of thinking. ;)
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe I forgot to review the last chapter :O Now you see why I say my memory its bad. :( I forget things very easily....But anyway, the last 2 chapters were great!!! I really liked how Seth was acting when Jay was questioning him about the dream XD I can't wait to see what happens next :D
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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Will they do it finally or are you going to torture Jay (and the readers)a bit more? XDD Either way I'll wait for more! ;) I liked all the chapters untill now (even if I didn't comment). Jay was csared when flying although he wanted it to happen so badly! That was great! XD I had fun reaing that part! XD And when Jay gave Seth the blow job! Uahaha!! Will Seth find out about it? Will Jay let it unconsciously slip? XD I wonder how would Seth punish Jay. :) Okay, I'm stoping here.
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
first off. i love your story so far. and is Jay a Picses? are you one? because i am. and a picses lives in their mind. i am the girl version of Jay. seriously. the other day i told (mentally) the wind that i hated it... like jay hates the rain. and i TOTALLY had a scary dream about zombies last night. your fuckin freaking me out.