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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another chapter!! :D I liked it. I really love them together, so cute and funny XD
Ummm, I couldn't help to see your comments on another reviewer, but mpreg as an spinoff? That would be interesting :D It would be funny to see Jay freak out because he's pregnant XD But of course, its your choice :) If you don't want to do it, you don't have to. :)
Until the next chapter then ^____________^
Ummm, I couldn't help to see your comments on another reviewer, but mpreg as an spinoff? That would be interesting :D It would be funny to see Jay freak out because he's pregnant XD But of course, its your choice :) If you don't want to do it, you don't have to. :)
Until the next chapter then ^____________^
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that last line was funny :P The bathtub setting is always a good seting, its comfy and warm and intimate and can be really yummy or just a little yummy lol I honestly have no idea where you're going but its fun to tag along with the ride! So he might not get to tell Blue huh? I think it'd be great if Blue got to tease Seth hehe Thanks for writing!
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! Hurray! They did the deed and it was great! The love scene made me so happy. It was just what you would expect from Jays POV. I laughed at the line where Jay says he forgot to think. That is the first time that has ever happened. I guess Jay just fell into his own trap. You never know what will happen when you give a demon a blowjob. I loved his round about confession- too funny. I don't think Seth will ever get bored having Jay as his mate. Seth is such a sweetheart and he is perfect for Jay. so romantic. I love it.
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...wow...
I wasn't expecting that one lol
verrrry interesting development
I cannot wait to see what Jay's reaction to that comment of Seth's will be
I love Seth he is so loveable and though Jay is a nut he is soooo cute I just want to pull on his cheeks :)
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER ... it was so awkwardly funny you know the type where its like 'oh dear hahahaha ... cringe'
Poor Seth just seemed so confused AWWW THEY ARE ALL SOOO CUUUUUTE
lol, I cannot wait till the next chapter :)!
I wasn't expecting that one lol
verrrry interesting development
I cannot wait to see what Jay's reaction to that comment of Seth's will be
I love Seth he is so loveable and though Jay is a nut he is soooo cute I just want to pull on his cheeks :)
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER ... it was so awkwardly funny you know the type where its like 'oh dear hahahaha ... cringe'
Poor Seth just seemed so confused AWWW THEY ARE ALL SOOO CUUUUUTE
lol, I cannot wait till the next chapter :)!
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHA!!! Great work! Them mating without even knowing! XDDD I'm not worrying about the bite anymore. ;P I don't think Jay anticipated that with his blow job he would "mate". XDDD And making sex the seal was just genious! XD
Oh! And the previous chapter was great too. Kind of rushed, but I liked it. XD
Oh! And the previous chapter was great too. Kind of rushed, but I liked it. XD
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great! soooo yummmy I cant believe it! lol great job you know? So Seth was the one that snapped, I thought it would be Jay lol What a yummy surprise that must have been for Seth, I'd be appreciative of something like that :P I am loving this story its so great! thanks for writing!
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I found the smut really good :P It was a reeeeaaaallllyyyyy good chapter >_< XD
And as always, can't wait to see how they act after that XD And thank you for another chapter so soon :)
And as always, can't wait to see how they act after that XD And thank you for another chapter so soon :)
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! They finally did it!!!
About time they lost control and just went for the prize. Tho I'm sensing Jay might be pretty pissy when he wakes up, hmmmmmm.
Should be interesting. He he he!
More please! ;)
About time they lost control and just went for the prize. Tho I'm sensing Jay might be pretty pissy when he wakes up, hmmmmmm.
Should be interesting. He he he!
More please! ;)
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.O Wow, great chapter! Though I'm curious now as to who won the 'deal' or if it kind of just went out the window after all that.
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my that's amazing! they're mates now ha ha ha by a very round about occurrence :D Seth wants Jay yay! so what will Jay do, go with the flow I guess lol so what does being mates mean exactly? are they going to have babies now? Do they go meet other demons and have a big flying demonized ritual of a wedding? lol anyways thanks for writing!