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I had to laugh at him because he sounds just like me. I get so lost in my mind too. I kept seeing your story but kept going to other stories. I wanted to wait until it was complete and it is. I knew I was going to like it and I love it. The spelling and grammer are good. Thanks for the read.

that's really funny lol yes i guess we do kinda like shiny things he he I like to look at shiny things and I'd imagine I'd go looking for it too :D how fun so demon babies! he he great, I remember you mentioned that before too yay :)The dmon is back! but Jay is Seth's mate now so he shouldn't be able to touch him otherwise the other demons will kick his but is what I understood, so he's officially crazy then ha ha Will he dangle string for Jay cause the shiny following thing reminded me of a kitten for some reason...anyways thanks for writing!

I iked it as always, but... (yes! there's a "but") Weren't Jay thoughts at the beginning a bit too much? I know he thinks of weird things and all, but I had the feeling that he thought a bit too long about them. I don't know. Maybe I'm just impatient to know what will happen next. And it was so like Jay to go outside right into a trap. XDD Will Greggy and Seth fight? XDD I can't wait to find out. ;)
The previous chapter was great too. XD With Seth around Jay'll have lots of sex. XDD

Sweet. XDD Too bad it was so short. XDD I'll be waiting for the sequels. ;P Too bad you didn't write another sex scene with them, but I hope you'll make up for it in the sequel. ;) I want hot steamy sex! XDD Thanks for this story! I enjoyed it a lot(all of it). ;)

Fantastic story. I loved it to bits! I'm looking forward to the sequels. I love me some jealousy. XD

he he he yay That chapter was a little romantic :D sweet! what with Seth saying he liked Jay and all awwww :)so yay the sequel has Blue in it! that sounds fun, I'm getting all excited thinking of the possibilities! Soo much could happen! and demon babies! so can Jay be the one to get pregnant? that would be fun lol, anyways this story is fun, thank you! :D

noooooooooooooooooooooooo!
I could u end it like that!! u should'v continued at least until they we're over! lol *pervert much? hi hi hi*
well the only reason I'm not crying at the end of one of my favorite stories is your promise of more to come. did u hint at some mpreg later on? please do!!!
there's something I sure would like to read... Jay + mpreg... ahahahahah... it will be Jay right? cause it would be hilarious to see his reaction to something like that.
anyway, let's get back on track... another funny chapter my friend *even tho I keep saying u could'v taken the ending cene a little further ;P*
you'r stories r entertaining, funny, actually hv a plot & you'r characters r interesting, resuming: great job & keep them coming.
u got a fan! xD

The End! Very nice way to end the story with Greggy getting beaten up. Jay was at his character best getting lured outside because he saw something shiny. He really is a just like a jaybird. Poor Seth can't turn his back for a minute without Jay getting into trouble. The two of them are great together. BTW Chapter 26 was very very hot. I am sad the story is done but I am looking forward to the oneshots whenever they show up. Thanks for the great story. I am glad that The Music of the Demons is still ongoing. Looking forward to seeing how that turns out.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
I FREAKING LOVE THIS SOOO MUCH
I CANT BELIEVE ITS THE END
I LOVE SETH AND JAY AND AND AND
ITS SO FUNNY AND AMUSING AND JAY IS PRETTY MENTAL
BUT OMG NOOO#!
lol ... okay im better now but im really sad, i love this so much the characters are so likeable and and and, I cant believe its ending! will the sequel be from Jay's pov because seriously I love him just so much! Demon babies yum! I can just imagine how Jay would take that lol and something tells me Greggie-deary isn't completely gone. IM SO EXCITED NOW OMG YAYAYAYAYYAYAYA
lol you are so AMAZING!!!!
excuse my bad grammer and no putting capitals in but im just so excited and seriously ...
okay i'll stop now, really looking forward to the next one!

:O The end?!! T-T I'm sad :( But happy too :D The last 2 chapters were great. And I can't wait to read the sequels :3 I just love your characters, and I want to see more of them >_<

Until the next time!! :3