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(3) Such a scatterbrain Jay is but I just couldn't stop reading he's too funny, besides I know how he feels I tend to drift off into my daydreams all the time, drives certain people crazy :) I almost wish we could have gotten Seth's pov just to find out what he was thinking having to deal with Jay but I think he's just pretty much exasperated all the time around him. It was weird that Seth kept following Jay around even went into his room uninvited, I'm kind of hoping he's gotten over that now since it was a little odd but other than that I'll definitely be waiting for an update, these two are going to make for an interesting pairing :)

That was hilarious! More please! Dropping his towel in front of his stalker guy! i would love to read some more. The best stories are the ones that write themselves. Keep up the good work.

Love it. Jay is so cool. his character and 'i act like i dont care, but really do' atitude i really like. I like the way everything is writen in his perspectiv. Update, please!

I really like this. It made me laugh. When I read the part about "yay fan girls" I almost spit my OJ all over the computer monitor. Your main character, Jay, has an awesome sense of humor. Keep it up.

Well, its a good start. It has me interested in the story. I hope you continue, because I want to know more about it :) There were parts were it confused me, but I think that was just me XD Sometimes I don't read right...Or I just don't follow the story well :S XD But I understand whats happening. :)

Will be waiting for the next chapter :) (Now I go to read your other one XD)