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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... More? Please...? As fast as you can? *puppy eyes* I never read something like this story ever before. At first I was annoyed, but then I adjusted and now I think that this way you can feel being a bit more inside of the story if you know what I mean. ;P
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't mind my annoyance. If I didn't like the story from the start I wouldn't keep reading it. XD I just had a hard time adjusting to Jay's way of thinking. ;) But I was really curious (still am) where will the story lead to and I like it more and more. XD
Now I'm going to wait for more chapters. XD I'm really curious who Seth is and where is Jay Jay going. XD
Thank you for updating!
Now I'm going to wait for more chapters. XD I'm really curious who Seth is and where is Jay Jay going. XD
Thank you for updating!
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This fanfic is pretty crazy but not bad XD I like it. I would really like to know what happens next. O.o I have the feeling its going get more interesting now :D
Until the next chapter then :)
Until the next chapter then :)
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story right now, you're narration of it is amazing and hilarious, I can't wait to see what happens!
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha ha he got kidnapped, what will happen next? lol and his dreams were real? so they were actually making out with each other? cool. :D thanks for the update.
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol woops my mistake. That was a fast update :D Its so funny listening to (or reading?) him debate with himself about whether or not he wants to have sex with Seth, and how he is unconsciously teasing him lol its so great =P I think sexual frustration is a good thing for Seth, I think a little more description on his reactions would be funny too, but its all good :D Thanks!
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.O Someone knows me... that's scary... Cool! but scary....
And I wish I could update as quickly as you, I couldn't believe it when I checked back to find a new chapter already. I like how... obstinate Jay is, the fact that even though he's been kidnapped by what pretty much could be considered a complete stranger but still has the stones to back talk the entire time is great. Even more so since he does it in such an annoying/entertaining way. (annoying to Seth, entertaining to everyone else)
And I wish I could update as quickly as you, I couldn't believe it when I checked back to find a new chapter already. I like how... obstinate Jay is, the fact that even though he's been kidnapped by what pretty much could be considered a complete stranger but still has the stones to back talk the entire time is great. Even more so since he does it in such an annoying/entertaining way. (annoying to Seth, entertaining to everyone else)
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is too hilarious. I was so happy when I saw the new chapters. What a cute couple. Let the molestation begin!
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol this story is funny, keep writing its great!
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the new 2 chapters. They were funny. XD I would really like to know what happens next. :D And Seth its a little creepy XD But I like him. :3