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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A chapter so soon! :O Yay!!!~ X3 THANK YOU!~
The chapter was good XD I really enjoyed it. :) Seth sounds cool O_O! At first I thought he was a vampire (don't know if he is still vampire :S if he is, not a problem XD But then it would be, 'I thought he was a normal vampire') but now he sounds really awesome :D Can't wait for the next one!
The chapter was good XD I really enjoyed it. :) Seth sounds cool O_O! At first I thought he was a vampire (don't know if he is still vampire :S if he is, not a problem XD But then it would be, 'I thought he was a normal vampire') but now he sounds really awesome :D Can't wait for the next one!
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Our main character can be so annoying, but I like him that way. Poor Seth. XDD He's trying to save our piss pot and Jay is making it very hard for him. XD You're evil. I like those two so much! And I'm really curious what will happen next. You're really good at mistery making. You're making the reader balance on edge. ;) Thanks for the update!
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL. This story is so funny! Thanks!
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The two of them are just perfect for each other. Poor Seth is going to have his hands full keeping track of Jay. I am having so much fun reading this.
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol woops he's gone! lol Lots of stress for Seth ha ha. Jay's such a scatterbrain but he always gets back to thinking about screwing Seth, no matter what he was thinking about, its great :D I like how he just doesn't seem to care about being kidnapped other than being a bit indignant about it, he just gets out of the car like its a joke lol. Lots of things can happen in a city, thanks for the chapter :D
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I . FREAKING . LOVE . IT
seriously the idea and layout is just so strange that i love it,
Jay is sooo intriguing .. his thoughts are really amusing if not slightly confusing sometimes that it feels exactly like you are reading someone's thoughts as they think it ... wow that was a mouthful :|
Seth is interesting too ... mysterious
anyways I LOVE IT and i can't wait till next weekend to read more :D
seriously the idea and layout is just so strange that i love it,
Jay is sooo intriguing .. his thoughts are really amusing if not slightly confusing sometimes that it feels exactly like you are reading someone's thoughts as they think it ... wow that was a mouthful :|
Seth is interesting too ... mysterious
anyways I LOVE IT and i can't wait till next weekend to read more :D
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my so funny, the part where he's running and he tangents about how he almost went out for track but didn't for his video game time, I don't know why exactly but that really made me laugh. I like how he didn't take offense to being called stupid, and just kinda went with it that was great too. And it seemed like he almost didn't think twice about them having fangs, he's so abnormal lol so back in the city, so much fun. Thanks!
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:O A lot of new chapters! Cool! :D It really its getting more and more interesting XD I can't wait for more. :)
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I love Jay's bluntness, even if it does get him in trouble more often then not. And speaking of trouble, I'm getting the feeling that Jay might just be a little in over his head.... I can't wait to see what'll happen to him next (and if him and Seth to get to sexing each other up :P )
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Laughing hysterically- kidnapped by a cult... Jay is so funny to watch so who does he end up with Seth or Greggie
fangs?
fangs?