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for The Music of the Demons

by Babisko

person Itchan
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
>< That was really good.....I just love it! >< The story its getting good. With every chapter I get more into it.
Can't wait for more O_O!

And you don't have to be sorry. :) When a really good chapter ends, I already want more, or even before it ends XD But I know I have to wait :( Sometimes days, other time weeks, and even months :( But I will wait all the time it takes :) And THANK YOU for updating fast :3

Until the next chapter then. ^__^
person kylee
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh so good! I am glad that they are starting to reveal a little more about themselves. I am curious about Kaden's mother and family. Is Dean going to propose to Kaden before they take off?
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh i love this story. Fast moving plot line but still detailed. I love the Characters more with each new chapter. Will we learn more about jaden. doe he have any other powers beside super hearing?

Thanks for updating so quickly.
person Itchan
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
T.T I wanted more!!!! >< I'm starting to love this fanfic. >< Its really good! I can't wait for more!
person kylee
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Babby, this story is so amazingly cool. i am at chapter 4 and I am ready to cry because I know there are only two chapters to go. I love it. I am also enjoying Dreaming of Demons. I love stories with mpreg so I really can't wait for that part. Your writing is excellent and your stories are delicious so keep up the good work.
person wollfyn
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just started reading your story. I'm curious to know more about Dean and Kaden. I'm also thrilled with the mpreg plotline. Can't wait to see how their relationship develops. Keep up the good work!
person Passing Reader
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was really interesting to read, most people don't give the vampire's Point of view when writing a story like this. Right now I think this could go anywhere, mythical stories like this always have endless possibilities. I do think this story could use a beta reader if you can find one handy; in chapter 5 Kaden asked why Dean had not asked for his name when in chapter 2 that was his first question. Otherwise it’s just small mistakes, I’m no perfect writer myself so it’s all good’s :D I can’t wait for the next installment, here’s waiting for the next chapter! ~Passing Reader
person Itchan
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O! Another chapter already?! YAY~!! X3 Thank you :)

The chapter was really good. And, like I had said in my last review, I really love how Dean is with Kaden. He acts sweet lol And so different :o Its really interesting to see. Can't wait for more :)
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow/ This is a great story very creative. I love your characters, Dean and Kaden. i love the scene where Dean having fun in the shower only to be joined by a sleep waking kaden. It was great. Thanks for sharing.
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...I was already addicted.....hn..I´m already addicted too this story so please upload next chapter soon ^_^