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I just can’t wait for them to have sex! XD But anticipation is so sweet here! It’s the first time I really enjoy waiting for a sex scene so much! I want it to happen and in the same time I want the way to it to last as long as you can make it. XD Small steps are so sweet. ;)
And…
I just figured something out, I think… I may be wrong, but I want to ask. Is Kaden’s blindness something like a woman’s period? It sure looks like it. He wasn’t blind from the start and it happens once a month or so, right? XD And since you wrote Mpreg there got to be a way for him to be pregnant so he should have something like a period, right?
If I’m right and this is a spoiler remove it if you don't want the readers to find this out so soon. I was just curious if I’m right. ;)
I’m looking forward to your next chapters. :D

I'm waiting for more. XDD And Kaden's period will become obvious when he becomes pregnant and stops loosing his eyesight. ;)

You update fast! :o Not that I'm complaining XD :P

The chapter was gooooood....-.-....At the end, when he says his angel likes to be bitten, I don't know why, but I thought ''yeah, he's joining the dark side'' XD Its so stupid, but I laughed lol I must be getting crazy lol ><

Hey, I read Kasia-chan's review, and if it is like that, thats really interesting, kind of funny, but really cool! :D I have never read something like that! Its very unique! Can't wait to read about it. :3

Until the next chapter then. :)

By the way, I totally forgot that you asked about the length of the chapters >< Well, I don't really mind how short or long it is. I think you should do what you think is best; or what you can do at the moment. :) I won't complain. ^____^

Sorry I didn't review sooner. ><

Well, like I always say, the chapter was great! >< I'm SO happy he accepted! :3 Can't wait to see how things go between them. :) Until the next chapter then!

I want to say that I don't know which story of yours I like better... This or that wth Seth and Jay. This one is from the demons point of view and the other is from the humans. Maybe that's why I can't decide which one's better. I like both. And I like Mpreg so I think I'll enjoy this story a lot. XD Not to mention that Kaden is sweet. I wonder what kind of demon's blood he has in his veins. I have about milion question, but I think you'll answer a good amount of them by writing the next chapters. XD So I'll be patiently waiting (Okay, maybe not so patiently, but still waiting) for your updates.

Kaden is so sweet and virginal. I can't wait for Dean to seduce him some more. He seems to enjoy being with Dean but he has problems committing to the idea of being gay.

I wasn't expecting a new chapter so soon O_O THANK YOU :3

Well, what can I say? The chapter was even better than the last one. I really don't know what more to say XD Just, I really want to know what happens to them!! O.O

Until the next chapter then :)

Yay! I like this seduction. I wonder which was more shocking for Kaden - getting jacked off or getting bitten. Lovely chapter. Adam is is so sweet.

MORE pls :)

Go for it Dean! But be gentle with Kaden since it is his first time.