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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter reminds me of how sweet and virginal Kaden really is. He is so shy and cute! And again the sex scenes were very good. Congratulations on writing through the difficult parts. The story is moving along very nicely. I hope Dean really will make Kaden completely his before they leave town because I cannot wait for the eventual mpreg. I love how Dean is becoming more and more sensitive to Kaden's desires. This is a delightful story.
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And here's another cool story!
Just read all 13 chapters at once and here I am begging for more! ;)
Dean's just totally head over heals huh? love sure messes with our heads. well, I'm dying to read the rest and please, please, please, give us more smut!!
Just read all 13 chapters at once and here I am begging for more! ;)
Dean's just totally head over heals huh? love sure messes with our heads. well, I'm dying to read the rest and please, please, please, give us more smut!!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. A bit of sex between them. XDD I'm so happy! *dances around* I just can't wait for Dean fully posesing Kaden. ;) But as I said before you're making the anticipation so sweet and worth it. XD Although I feel a bit disappointed that Dean doesn't plan on bitting Kaden any time soon. I'll wait for the next chapter very impatiently. :D
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool vampire seme skills. Blowing Kaden's mind and still leaving him wanting more. I have to say I do admire Dean's self control. And the love scene was very very good.
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! :D Good things happened :P XD Just like in ''Dreaming of Demons''. It was really good. X3 And things are progressing between them, thats also good :P Can't wait for more.
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about the smut darling, the way you had it in this last chapter was enough to get my face hot n///n;
Though I am quite a fan of up-against-the-wall-molesting... *COUGH*
Oh dear, awkward, just as I wrote that sentence my 2 year old nephew wandered into the room... aish, how dirty do I feel now? Sometimes I don't even know how I can stand being a pervert.
... oh yeah, hot sweaty MAN SEX.
XD
Keep going my darling~
♥
Though I am quite a fan of up-against-the-wall-molesting... *COUGH*
Oh dear, awkward, just as I wrote that sentence my 2 year old nephew wandered into the room... aish, how dirty do I feel now? Sometimes I don't even know how I can stand being a pervert.
... oh yeah, hot sweaty MAN SEX.
XD
Keep going my darling~
♥
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
other than the mechanical errors (spelling, grammar) I quite like this story :]
only... I know it's set in America. but for some reason when I read the dialogue, there's a British accent on their words.
man I'm a retard. XD;;
(accents are hotter anyhow. keeps me more attracted to the story when I imagine a sexy vampire with a sexy accent. grrrreerrrererrrowl!)
XD
♥
only... I know it's set in America. but for some reason when I read the dialogue, there's a British accent on their words.
man I'm a retard. XD;;
(accents are hotter anyhow. keeps me more attracted to the story when I imagine a sexy vampire with a sexy accent. grrrreerrrererrrowl!)
XD
♥
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Bite him again! Try some other naughty stuff too.
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the chapter :) Dean is cute! But of course, has his dark side XD I'm loving him more with each chapter X3 I think each day of the deal will be really interesting. :D Can't to see what happens next!
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 was very clear and well written. Dean seems to be more confident in himself and more sensitive to Kaden's feelings. It is like he is more focused on wooing Kaden now (and it's working). So cute. Perhaps he he is less nervous about being rejected now that he is absolutely sure that Kaden is the one for him.