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for Surrender

by Sweetsong22

person lilac
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter! and u updated fast! im happy that they felt something for each other and they did not fight anymore. i just hope that Arabel will be alright!and Devo too! please keep this up!
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what a GREAT story!!!!! Usually I don't even read stories that have to do w/other planets, dimensions, etc., but I started reading this and from the beginning I was hoooked! I read all 8 chapters in one sitting and I've been at the edge of my seat all day! Please update soon!
person lilac
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor Arabel, why are those things keep on happening to him? I hope Devo would really find a way to keep him safe and loved. And Lucien, I hope he gets what he deserves from Devo sooner. Arabel, you better stay near Devo all the time and may both of you already admit what you are feeling for each other. great update!
person J42
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow - thanks for the riveting chapter. Sorry that Daymos had to go... but it certainly sounds like Devo is going to be so much more interesting.
person lilac
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yehey! an update! am so glad! i can't wait for more! how did arabel ended there? i'm so curious and excited about this story. please more!
person J42
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the story! I like the premise, and the characters. Love how the plot is picking up so that they are already in hot water ... am certainly looking forward to more of your updates. ;-)
person lilac
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome! i am already liking it! please update soon. i can't wait for more. very interesting and unique. I'm curious as to whether Daymos will fall in love with Crian or Arabel.
person Perona
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good start. I'd like to see where you go with it.