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for Surrender

by Sweetsong22

person lilac
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor arabel... why do these things keep on happening to him? the price he has to pay for being strikingly beautiful. i just hope that these men will get what they deserve for hurting him that way. he deserves to be cherished and loved and treated with so much care! how I wish Devo would find him sooner and would bring him to his place and keep him safe! he is such a magnet to men! Maybe if Devo already has him, Devo would just keep him in his room? thanks for the update. i enjoyed it a lot. and by the way, i love how the twins really care for each other. They love each other deeply and are willing to sacrifice everything for each other. Now I know exactly how Arabel ended in the brothel. No wonder Anata would do everything to rescue her brother.
person lilac
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
by the way, your story deserves reviews! I hope you won't stop writing because a lot of us are reading. i hope you would not lose the passion to continue this story. This is amazing.
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, poor Arabel! Will he even survive before Devo can rescue him and Anata? Jeez, these men are so cruel; why would you even want someone who wasn't "participating"? They are too power hungry.
person Rosei
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gripping story! Very enjoyable and characters are believable!
(At least to me!) Like this mythos and universe!

Thank you!
R
person lilac
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the great update! Devo is in love! I can't wait for them to be reunited. its really good to know that Devo's parents do not disagree with his relationship with Arabel. And I really do hope that Anata and Arabel are safe. please update soon! thank you!
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, another GREAT chapter!!!!! I just CAN'T WAIT for Devo and Arabel to finally be reuinited!!!! Hopefully Anata is telling Arabel about the misunderstanding. I anxiously await your next installment!
person Avernion
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gahhh! The chapter ended xS And here I wanted to read more. Laugh.
person lilac
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another new chapter! its really getting very exciting! and Devo's falling in love! I hope they will get out of that mess. Anata's plan of them going to Devo's planet is brilliant! Yeap, i have read that chapter but I was really curious as to what anata did.... hehehe. but it's really okay, you don't have to go into details... still loving it so much anyway! this is just a simple way of expressing my gratitude for writing a magnificent story. thank you again and please keep it up.
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo!!!!! You can't leave it like that!!!! OMG!!!! Is Devo gonna be ok????? I knew he lied to the people and I knew he didn't betry Arabel. Poor Arabel; he may never know how Devo really felt about him. I can't believe you left it like that! You better update soon!!!! (j/k), but hopefully quickly? Please????
person lilac
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How exactly did Arabel ended up in the brothel anyway? i'm really curious to know. they somehow belonged to the upper class in their clan. please update soon. loving this story a lot.