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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't often bother with reviews but your story is just too great to be left uncommented *_*
I just love this, you carry on the story quickly enough that the reader can't get bored but yeat it's not just hasting from a sex xcene to another, I really, really like that. And you have the balls to kill characters! It makes the story much more interesting and exciting. There are too many stories that end with every single character getting laid and living in a fluffy pink cloud for the rest of their lives, while they are nice and cute to read sometimes, yours is much more realistic, I love it. (Though you'd better write an happy ending for this or I'll make some terrible things happen >:D)
Erm yeah, I love this story, update soon, please? ^^
I just love this, you carry on the story quickly enough that the reader can't get bored but yeat it's not just hasting from a sex xcene to another, I really, really like that. And you have the balls to kill characters! It makes the story much more interesting and exciting. There are too many stories that end with every single character getting laid and living in a fluffy pink cloud for the rest of their lives, while they are nice and cute to read sometimes, yours is much more realistic, I love it. (Though you'd better write an happy ending for this or I'll make some terrible things happen >:D)
Erm yeah, I love this story, update soon, please? ^^
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I'm rather captivated by your plot. I look forward to the next chapter.
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You don't know how excited I was to see you updated!! You made my Friday night!!! What an AWESOME chapter!!! OMFG - never mind the smex, I am positively
intrigued by the details of the fights between the enemies, the way they travel, everything. OMG, I could just read your stories all day long! Now, I'm
anxiously awaiting your next chapter...I hope Devo finds it in his heart to tell Arabel the truth; I think Arabel will be so hurt knowing that Devo knew what happened to his planet, his SISTER, and his past this whole time. I think Arabel should hear it from Devo; the sooner the better.
intrigued by the details of the fights between the enemies, the way they travel, everything. OMG, I could just read your stories all day long! Now, I'm
anxiously awaiting your next chapter...I hope Devo finds it in his heart to tell Arabel the truth; I think Arabel will be so hurt knowing that Devo knew what happened to his planet, his SISTER, and his past this whole time. I think Arabel should hear it from Devo; the sooner the better.
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah it was so heart wrenching to read! Poor Arabel, I hope he'll be okay when he regained his memory, although I do think that no remembering some of those dreadful times will be great but that will also mean he'll forgot how he acquires the light Devo gave him huh? Sigh... Rest in peace, Anata. Somebody need to kick Medaq's ass! Looks like I should look forward to an intergalatic war huh?
*gives you idea cookies*
*gives you idea cookies*
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, it was amazing! I did not expect events to turn that way. but i'm glad it did. at least arabel does not remember what has been done to him. i just hope that he will still be okay in the end. he and devo deserves to be happy. poor anata. she really is dead. i just hope that arabel can cope when the time comes. or better yet, he will never remember his past anymore. i am thrilled and i am really looking forward to your next update. and by the way, how is misha faring? was he told about what happened to arabel? i hope he will not ruin things. i alos like his character. and i hope he does not get hurt.
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story you have written! Please update soon. I will really want to know the outcome of the decesive battle. It's sad that after all the pain and misery, the twins couldn't be reunited.
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 12
Hi, Concepcion30,
You sure like torturing poor Arabel, lol. Lovely story, it never gets boring. I feel sorry for Anata, she never got to live a good life.
Hi, Concepcion30,
You sure like torturing poor Arabel, lol. Lovely story, it never gets boring. I feel sorry for Anata, she never got to live a good life.
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, poor Anata! Poor Arabel, will he survive the death of his sister? This chapter was so tragic! Those poor twins, especially Arabel, continuously raped and beaten. What monsters they are! I just hope after all this, there will be a happy ending! Great chapter; so much detail and what an imagination you have!!!!! Just thinking of ways that the enemies fight one another, the different weapons they use, amazing! I anxiously await the next chapter!
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Anata. I liked her :'( I just can't see Arabel being happy ever again with things like this. She was after all the only one he really could trust. The one he loved the most. Gaaa. So sad x'( Can't wait to see what happens!
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh no! Anata! I still have this little hope inside that she could somehow be alright! I was hoping that it would be Medaq instead who will be dead! anyway, im still glad that Devo found Arabel. Though it was in a very unfortunate circumstance. i just hope that Devo could fill what Arabel will be missing when the time comes! I just can't imagine how Arabel could cope with this right now. His sister is his life! Oh, I still hope that by some miracle, Anata will be alright! Thanks for updating! And thank you for the assurance that you will continue this story. I really love this story a lot and I'm sure a lot of others do to. More power! And please update again soon! Thank you!