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for Surrender

by Sweetsong22

person Roya7777
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WoW

I just find this story 2 days ago and I have not done anything except reading this for the past 2 days! I'm stunned! I was magnificent! I really really enjoyed reading it and especially since I didn't have to wait for another chapter to come! :p

Just wanna say THANK YOU for sharing this! now I'm heading for your other fic! I hope that one is as good as this one!

Oh BTW, please do write about Jubek and Woen. I'm really curious how it will work out! :D maybe even more than a one-shot! ;)

Thanks again!

R
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, so cute with the twins! It brought tears to my eyes that they named the baby girl Anata. Sweet ending, I hope everything works out for them.

Very interesting about how Devo had to "become" a woman! Very funny!

I look forward to reading more from you; you are a great writer!
person Nina
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay I loved how you dealt with *spoiler* death in chapter 16 <3 so much aww

But now that its over I wish for more stories from this universe and characters or pre or post.

...and I'd really enjoy Arabel/Devo genderswitch when they decide to have a family >.>;; [sorry guilty pleasure...]
but anything would be sweeet.

Oh yes Gillian is the coolest character in this story xD but seriously all the charas were well done.


person Nina
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*exclamationnnnnnnnnn* xD
Okay seriously this story is awesome. It's so enthralling and interesting and gawd everything about it is awesome.

I wish that *spoiler* didn't die because I thought that they were such a strong character,
but oh gawd poor Arabel he just keeps getting bashed and worse.

I enjoy the fact that there is gender!switch, well maybe eventually :D
person Kaydenn
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please do write something about Jubek and Woen!

I really enjoyed this story. It was well written, and couldn't have ended any better. Devo traveling into Arabel's mind was very exciting, and probably my favorite part. Keep writing. I can't wait to read more of your stuff in the future.
person elie
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the nice story! ^_^
person J42
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's beautiful and so much fun! Thanks for taking us on this journey... so glad Arabel and Devo got together. Bummed about Anata, and hopes their species survive because they were such wonderful characters. Thanks again!
person Yugiko
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gawd. Your writing is AMAZING! Ao detalied and so wonderfully constructed! Each chapter had me on the edge of my seat and wanting more. Jubek and Woen one-shot? YES PLEASE!! Can't wait to see the epilogue~
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED this story! I would love to read an epilogue to see how everyone is doing. I would also like to read about Woen and Jubek (I really like the character of Jubek; he's a feisty one!). Also, how about Stafon and Mischa. This was one of my favorite stories on here; so well thought out, perfect grammar, word structure, imagination, etc. You are an amazing author and I look forward to reading more from you.
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention that I thought the memorial service for Anata was beautiful. Gillian's words, Arabel's words, were beautiful. Gillian and her husband D'Ken(?), have accepted Arabel as family and her words and Arabel's words brought me to tears. You are a very eloquent writer!