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September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A very well-built world with good character development! Please email me sometime, I'd love to discuss something with you.
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June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story a lot!!!! It was nearly as good as Salaciousness^^ I really start to think that Salaciousness will always be my favorite^^ I really liked the released forms of Devo and the queen^^ Thanks so much for sharing this with us and now I'm off to read the sequal!!!
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February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a gret piece, I loved the charater.
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March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Jubek love, do write about it, will you?
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March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you have no idea how much I love your story!
Initially, I came to this site to well... read some erotic stories. When I first came across Surrender, I basically scrolled down to the sex parts for the first two chapters. I was just stricken on how amazingly well written it was that I found myself reading the actual story. Honestly, I couldn't believe that I found such an amazing tale. I could hardly put it down. Scratch that, I didn't put it down. Your story just tore my interest away from a game that I had been looking forward to playing and complete for months. Right now as I'm writing this, I'm too excited to read your other stories that to play that game.
Your characters were simply amazing. I love Arabel and Devo particularly. Woen was good too and I wish he had more scenes.
I'm a big sci-fi fanatic and the setting of this story just made me read it even more. It reminded me a lot of Stargate Atlantis, especially when you included the stargates themselves in the story. The Tolatrians were just so much like the Wraiths. As I was reading the battle part, I couldn't help but think about the Ancients vs. the Wraiths. Also with Gillian, she reminded me so much of an Ancient who had attained Ascension. It was just spectacular! The diplomacy parts reminded me of how John Sheppard and his team encountered new races in the Pegasus Galaxy, but there were some parts where it was more like the first contacts from Star Trek Voyager in the Delta Quadrant.
All in all, this story is one of the best original fanfictions I have ever read. All the aspects of the story were intertwined beautifully, and as you said on your profile "lots of sex isn't bad either." I consider those parts icing on a very delicious cake.
Initially, I came to this site to well... read some erotic stories. When I first came across Surrender, I basically scrolled down to the sex parts for the first two chapters. I was just stricken on how amazingly well written it was that I found myself reading the actual story. Honestly, I couldn't believe that I found such an amazing tale. I could hardly put it down. Scratch that, I didn't put it down. Your story just tore my interest away from a game that I had been looking forward to playing and complete for months. Right now as I'm writing this, I'm too excited to read your other stories that to play that game.
Your characters were simply amazing. I love Arabel and Devo particularly. Woen was good too and I wish he had more scenes.
I'm a big sci-fi fanatic and the setting of this story just made me read it even more. It reminded me a lot of Stargate Atlantis, especially when you included the stargates themselves in the story. The Tolatrians were just so much like the Wraiths. As I was reading the battle part, I couldn't help but think about the Ancients vs. the Wraiths. Also with Gillian, she reminded me so much of an Ancient who had attained Ascension. It was just spectacular! The diplomacy parts reminded me of how John Sheppard and his team encountered new races in the Pegasus Galaxy, but there were some parts where it was more like the first contacts from Star Trek Voyager in the Delta Quadrant.
All in all, this story is one of the best original fanfictions I have ever read. All the aspects of the story were intertwined beautifully, and as you said on your profile "lots of sex isn't bad either." I consider those parts icing on a very delicious cake.
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story really blew me away!
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I REALLY would like to know the conclusion of the Jubex and Woen arc... they are soooo made for each other.
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I found your story today and I could not stop reading until the last chapter. Even if sometimes the events experienced by the characters broke my heart. It was simply amazing. The characters you created are so interesting and so moving and I really enjoyed the fantasy world you've invented. I loved this story and I know I'll probably want to read it again despite the darkness of some chapters.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
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March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wasn't Spontaneous up here at some point? I vaguely remember reading it, but it wasn't finished. I'd love to be able to read the end.
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February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story, you did a brilliant job! However I would love to know what happened to Mischa, and if he stayed in a relationship with Devo's uncle. I also want to know what happens between Woen and Jubek, so I hope that you will write something about both these couples in the near future!!!