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for Kill Me With Love

by Shear

person Roya
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello Fay,

Thanks for the update and responses! :D

I'm reading Impossible Love right now, I will be back when I'm done with it! ;)

just one thing, I don't know if you notice this or not?! but take a look at this pic:

http://www.turboimagehost.com/p/1551828/39.JPG.html

google ads are ON your fic and I practically couldn't read a few lines!!! :(

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Well back to the Kill me with Love, marvelous as always! *.*

It is the second time that I see some one is using "urethra vibrators" in the fic! (Well except from Yamane Sensei in Viewfinder Series! :D you do read manga? don't you?! and I suppose you do know Asami and Akihito???

http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/scans/Viewfinder/2/

If you haven't, do so!!! You can't miss this! ;) )

What was I saying?! Ah .. yes, the one fic that I see some one use it was this one:

http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/story.php?storyid=598

The author Rob, has another story which is nicer than this one and both of the stories are extremely on the fetish side! In fact, I have not read anything as fetish as these! Any way, thought it might be interesting for you to read it! of course because the writer is a male the storyline and scenes are not what we, females, like very much! but still, it's good to know how they see the m/m relations! :P

WOW, how much I talk?! O.o

Sorry, well I'm waiting and might ask Yuuko to send you to another dimension if you do not update soon! :D Really, this is such a hangy!!!!! >.<

BTW, the first episode of the third series of xxxHolic is out with the subs! don't miss that one as well! ;)

With Love ^_^
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person Roya
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh...

What a nice fic!!! I'm a fan of pain in the fics!!! not really into lovey dovey from the start! :P

Anyway, just wanna tell you that my heart kept beating fast while reading this!!! Absolutely delicious! :D

and I like the psychological part of your story as well! I'm just wondering how you are going to change your characters for better (maybe worse!)

and yesss one big Q ??? Is this a happy ending story or one of these two is going to die??? I hate it when it happens! I hope your story wouldn't end like that! but with the serial killer thing going on and all those police men I wonder ...

Well, keep up the gr8 work and update soon!

Also thanks for sharing! ^_^

ps: have you written anything else like this?! I definitely love to read it if you have! *.*
person Anon
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love love love it
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schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, this story is perfect! I love it!! I can't wait for chapter 4!
person bubzilla
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I will definitely keep reading this.

I'm so sorry, you just acquired a fan-girl. *does fan-girl dance*
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is good :)
i like the consept
you should definatly continue :)
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the first chapter! Please update again soon. One other thing though, there seem to be alot of grammatical errors, maybe you should get someone to beta? Just a thought. Anywho, I simply love the idea of Rezail submitting to Zeil like that and the little twist about them actually having met before was brilliant.

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