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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Poor couple, lol. Maybe a ball of seaweed as a gag? XD I can't wait to read the next installment. :)
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! or to speak with our mother-tongue: echt hammermäßig mädel! after stumbling over 'fates wicked sense of humor' i checked out some of your other stuff - got to LOVE 'pay day'!! - and finally gave the originals a try. honestly, you should consider finding a publisher! but until then, i hope you´ll update this one+ your LB fic soon...and all the best to your little family!!
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I love both of your original storys!!!! It's so nice that Suran has sombody who can touch him!!! I really hope they get the problem with his voice under control!! I really like it when you write smutt!!!! But your story ideas are also fabolus!!! I hope you will continue with both storys asap!! See you next time!!
Your smint45
Your smint45
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shove a piece of pillow in his mouth? God my spelling sucks today. Anyway I liked it very much. I'm sorry to hear about your daughters fit and hope that she, and you, feel better soon.
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know that you written another story that was amazing like the Road less traveled. Your such a talented writer, I love all your stories. I wish there was a way I could be on a mailing list to get updates to your beautiful art on deviant art and your wonderful stories that you post here. Your truly amazing, I can't wait to read more of your work.
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it!
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah i like where this story is going and look forward to the next chapter.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I very much like this story. I adore Merfolk, and the poison is a very nice touch. I also love how you discribed Tim's love for water. It was done quite vividly, I could feel the emotion.
My only criterea is that you have quite a few spelling mistakes, which makes reading a bit annoying, and that you were a bit vague about what happened to earth and the space ship, and why Tim's family was taken.
I'm looking forward to the next instalment.
My only criterea is that you have quite a few spelling mistakes, which makes reading a bit annoying, and that you were a bit vague about what happened to earth and the space ship, and why Tim's family was taken.
I'm looking forward to the next instalment.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like!
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is good, I want to read more :D