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yup, it was the right decision to check the originals again - an update of this great story, YAY!! first, i´ve got to say that i´m deeply sorry that apparently some insensitive, arrogant a#holes are giving you trouble about your english. honestly, i can´t understand those people, first, no one forces them to read this, if they can´t stand the inevitable mistakes they can hit the back-button, its not that hard, right? second, its the story that counts, the characters and their development, a few misspellings hardly distract from a good plot and last but not least third, i´ve read stories with misspellings so worse i couldn´t even recognize the word, and so many you honestly couldn´t make sense of what was written, and those were from people whose mother tongue is english(!!) besides, we´re all writing fanfiction here, not an english exam, without getting money+ just for fun. basically what i´m saying is, ignore the a#holes, focus on your fans, and most of all have fun+write on!
About the new version: i´m glad that you´ve added some details about what had happened to good old earth+ how the crashed people live among the natives. the new chapter had me mewling in delight, for i was a tad worried that someone might try to steal tim from suran, but now their mating bond is complete. kudos for suran using his poison as a numbing lube, that was a strike of genius! and i agree with him, his human will freak at the news of getting knocked up someday...the rest of the changes though shouldn´t bother him too much, i figure he won´t grow a tail, but probably gills, so he can live fully underwater with his mate, given tims love for the sea i think he´ll actually like it. there is one thought though nagging in the back of my mind, and probably tims too once he can think clearly again: his family. he´s already being missing for days, they´ve got to be worried sick+searching for him. and although tim of course has to stay with suran, í´m sure he would like to let them know that he´s alive and well...somehow, i can SO see tims grandfather keel over from shock when his supposedly drowned grandson suddenly appears at the reeling of his boat, introducing him to his mate XD btw, is it suran or sunan? you´ve written both...but thats honestly the only typo i could find

Just found this story....I hope you update it soon....I LOVE IT!!

Tim and Sunan are now mated!! Oh...now Tim can bear young...that will be an interesting conversation!

Thanks for putting them back! I liked that new chapter :D

This story is really great :) well, there is a few mistakes here and there, but nothing serious. You have a way of writing which makes the words living.

You're from Germany? I could never had guessed just by looking at the way you write. I've seen 30-year old americans nake lots of more mistakes than you do, and they still cannot get the words living like you do. I've been troubled in the past by people who says "your english sucks! Stop writing" before. It actually made me stop writing for about 5 years. Can't people appreciate the story instead of how it's written? What's a story without a great plotline? And really, what's the fault in a few mistakes here and there? You can clearly see what the author means in any case :)
I'm waiting for more chapters :D have a great day

Hi, I was away just a few days and the story I love the most Thee Road Less Traveled and my second favourite story (I have just discovered it) almost disappeared from AFF. And only because of some people which are not able to value a good story, who care about gramatics more than for the actual story. Please don´t let yourself to be bothered by comments like that. Oh, and one more thing: I think that you will be young even after 100 years with a phantasy like yours. *hug*

Yay! I'm glad to see that you do, indeed, have a beta! It was much easier to read thank you both for your efforts! :) The only real error I caught in passing was that the word "planed" was still being used for 'planet' in the sentence here -> "Actually he was born on a long gone /planed/ called Earth, as one of the last children born onto it."
Just letting you know in case you want to fix it, I figure as long as I'm able to understand a story, then it's all good ^__^'
Here's awaiting the next chapter! ~Passing Reader

hey there i just want to say Ur right! i love Ur writing and Ur writing is better then most English writers >< i hope that u write Ur lovely slash story's they are the best. ^^. i just am glad that Ur making a stand for Ur self and i hope the best for u and Ur life.... i just want to read more meersong it such a good story i wish i could find more like them haza so yeah i just want to say I'm a fan or Ur work.

as a fellow writer (though probably far worse than you haha ^^; I know I suck), don't let the bad reviewers scare you away :) I come on this site for good stories, not academic papers that are flawless in their construction and punctuation. I only wish I could have read your stories before those dreadful reviewers had their say! Keep going so long as writing is fun and you'll be fine :D

Much love,

L.S.

I hope you will change your mind. I am thankfull to the authors that allow me to read good stories for free. I know that they enjoy writing them, but still, that is work and it is given to us for free. I enjoyed "road less traveled", I was away this past few days and didnot see meersong. I hope I will have the chance to see if the storie is as good as the summary lets hope.

Bye
M

NOO! Please put them back. I really waited for the next chapter... who cares about a bad grammar and it really wasn't that bad. Besides NightBird hasn't even read the whole first chapter, so I don't think he/she has any right to complain about it. And wth was that about 'respect the language'-thing, as if you make those grammar errors on purpose, besides the stories were not about how-to-write-in-English. I think I'm getting a little angry at this NightBird-person..

Could you please put the stories back in English? I know only few words in German..