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for Dragon Bait

by athenaartisan

schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I beg you please continue this story. PLEASE!! This is one of my favorites and I check every few days for more chapters because I can't wait. Please give me more!
person BlueDragon
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story, love it. I need to read MORE! Please hurry and write next chapter.
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update soon the wait is killing me. an i really like the elf he's interesting.
person jdbbrz27
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I finally got to find the time to read this wonderful update god I loved the end of it. It made me laugh I think that the knights well most of them deserve the treatment that Kieren has arranged for them and they should be grateful their alive at all. As far as Skif liking it well probably not but everyone doesn't always get what they want. I can't wait to see the next update it should be interesting to see Skif's reaction to the whole story. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with the move and job hunt.
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I read the first chapter and I had to keep reading this story. It has got me like a trout on a line; Hooked! I love this story I hope you update it soon.
schedule September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oops! Skif is not too happy about Kierans plans. Looks like there will be a loottt of explaining to do. What a way to the end chapter. Evil, evil cliffy, leaving us all in suspense to find out Kieran's reaction to Skif's rather err...blunt.. stament. I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this fic.
person circe266
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please please please don't make us wait so long for another chapter of your wonderful story!!! I was so happy when I saw that a new chapter had been posted.

I like that they now have a way of communicating, albeit indirectly through Kandir. Their reunion was so sweet, though Skif's longing for Llyr (and his later jealousy) was a bit surprising, given the slooooow pace of their developing relationship. Even though it bums me out a little, Skif's hilarious negative outburst at the end seems much more in line with where his head is at.

PLEASE don't make us wait until December to find out what happens next after this cliffhanger!
person fantome1
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, nice to see it heating up. Hope the smex is soon.
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOLZ!!! I was soooo happy to spot this update!!! you cant imagine how much I miss this story!!! and then you say you wont be updating again till Dec.... well you are soooo cruel! I love reading this... the chapter was wonderful! I have to somewhat agree with Gwengwel ...Kieran doesnt much think things thru... he may indeed love Skif... but I cant say he understands what its like from Skif's point of view... and with Allys 'size difference alone is crazy'... lol... poor Skif! I likely told you I wrote a story like this... the size different was a BIG facter... lol...puns! lol...

PLEASE don't make us wait until December to find out what happens next after this cliffhanger!