AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Dragon Bait

by athenaartisan

person venos
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
^______^
i look forward to see my handsome dragon.... how look like....!!????? I want know.*0*
person NarutoVixin
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you miss posted you have chapters 22 and 24 up but missed chapter 23 lol its kinda confusing
person venos
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi .i like ch 24 so much ...BUT.....
where is chap 23...??!!!! .`° ^ °`) when is more up date *0*). i realy like your story.^______^)
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Best day EVER! I love this story and it's great to see you posting again.
person Eiennoren
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Updates! Wow! 3 whole new chapters! Yay! Long too!!! You've made my day!!!! Thank you so much for updating!!! I hated sir Erik's death, that MOFO should have experienced something worse... But that's just me... Thank u for not killing skif... Wonder how it will affect him... Them... Yannow?
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you don't know how happy I was when I saw this update. Yay! I really like this story and it was sad when I couldn't read new chapters. I'm very curious what will happen now when Kieran's in his human form. ^-^ I'll be waiting for more. ^-^
Thanks for the update!
person wolfluv
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES OH YES!!! MY GOODNES I FEEL LIKE I JUST HAD AN ORGAZMIC ENCOUNTER! I was sooooooo happy to see this update! I'm glad you didn't just let it go! Oh what a cliffy to boot to! THANK YOU FOR COMING BACK!!!!
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just to be clear, Kieran is in his humanoid form in the last chapter? Or was he a dragon when ripping Erik apart and then transitioned into his humanoid form? And I am ecstatic Erik is finally dead. But I also wanted him to suffer for the rest of his life. Oh well.
person sabaku_lotus
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is some good shit. I really like the concept. Hell so what about the errors; its still pretty decent for a story.
person sabaku_lotus
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Read this whole story in one night. Its really good.

Damn. This chapter gave me feels. I didn't think that bastard would had done that. I wished he had more stuff happen to him. Stupid fucker.

I hope the next part is better though.

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?