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for Dragon Bait

by athenaartisan

person venos
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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i look forward to see my handsome dragon.... how look like....!!????? I want know.*0*
person NarutoVixin
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you miss posted you have chapters 22 and 24 up but missed chapter 23 lol its kinda confusing
person venos
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi .i like ch 24 so much ...BUT.....
where is chap 23...??!!!! .`° ^ °`) when is more up date *0*). i realy like your story.^______^)
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Best day EVER! I love this story and it's great to see you posting again.
person Eiennoren
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Updates! Wow! 3 whole new chapters! Yay! Long too!!! You've made my day!!!! Thank you so much for updating!!! I hated sir Erik's death, that MOFO should have experienced something worse... But that's just me... Thank u for not killing skif... Wonder how it will affect him... Them... Yannow?
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you don't know how happy I was when I saw this update. Yay! I really like this story and it was sad when I couldn't read new chapters. I'm very curious what will happen now when Kieran's in his human form. ^-^ I'll be waiting for more. ^-^
Thanks for the update!
person wolfluv
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES OH YES!!! MY GOODNES I FEEL LIKE I JUST HAD AN ORGAZMIC ENCOUNTER! I was sooooooo happy to see this update! I'm glad you didn't just let it go! Oh what a cliffy to boot to! THANK YOU FOR COMING BACK!!!!
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just to be clear, Kieran is in his humanoid form in the last chapter? Or was he a dragon when ripping Erik apart and then transitioned into his humanoid form? And I am ecstatic Erik is finally dead. But I also wanted him to suffer for the rest of his life. Oh well.
person sabaku_lotus
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is some good shit. I really like the concept. Hell so what about the errors; its still pretty decent for a story.
person sabaku_lotus
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Read this whole story in one night. Its really good.

Damn. This chapter gave me feels. I didn't think that bastard would had done that. I wished he had more stuff happen to him. Stupid fucker.

I hope the next part is better though.