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wow great start I love it!!! so please please update soon!!!!!!

Poor Skif. His dreams of becoming a knight dashed! Then to be brutilized for three looong years! Hope those knights get theirs. What goes around comes around.

oh this is very good i look forward to seeing what happens next

To deny Skif a chance at knighthood, brutilize and starve him for three years and now to use him as bait to lure out a dragon so they can kill it? Is there no end to these "knights" perfidy?

Are they in for the shocker of their lives! To think they are not dealing with a run of the mill dragon.

Kieran is probably doing the "Snoopy Dance" inside his head. To find out that that pitiful "female" is a male and a carrier to boot. Skif, in the meantime, is no doubt terrified out of his mind. Can't wait for Kieran to show the boy that he won't be swimming in stomach acids. The knights however........bwahahahahahahaha!!!

Hurry up with Chapter 3-pllleeeassseee!

Awesome story!!!! really luved the character development and the action! Plus theres a great blend of mystery as well!

Diffrent name really it is not in a bad way it will make the story easier to remember. Not saying it won't be. Anyway nice little opening wish is was a little longer but besides that it made me want to see what is going to happen next.

Starts interseting, but is a little short! Hope you get the next chappie up asap, which is hopfully a little longer so we get an expression of the story (prologe was to short for that *sorry*).But still hope to see more!

I like this, please update soon if possible ^-^