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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As soon as I read the review, that there will be a boy used like a sacrifice, a dragon, and that it was mpreg, I thought 'I'm going to like this', and I did!! Its really good! And I love your main characters :) I love dragons!!! They are awesome!
Some say chap.1 was short, I thought it was ok, like a prologue. As I was reading chap.2, when I was reaching the bottom of the page I really didn't want it to end.
Can't wait to read more!
Until the next chapter ^____^
Some say chap.1 was short, I thought it was ok, like a prologue. As I was reading chap.2, when I was reaching the bottom of the page I really didn't want it to end.
Can't wait to read more!
Until the next chapter ^____^
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I really like this story, and I hope to read more soon. Yes, there is a lot of mistakes due to the Hyperlexic-thingy, but that's just a word here and there, and in between it's really well written, so it's not at all hard to read! I hope you do find a beta, though, because that would make it perfect... I don't know much about being Hyperlexic, but I write a lot in English (on ff.net) and it's not my native language, so I have problems with words too... I find reading my story out aloud to myself helps, but maybe that wouldn't work for you? Well, I can't wait for the next chapter! The dragon sounds very charming... *grin* Oooohhh... hopes of M-preg? I'd like that...
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Athena! I found you! *jumps at Athena and gives a huge, glompy hug* Love your new story. I've enjoyed the prologue and first chapter. Creative plot you've got going. Funny, too. And I can't wait for mpreg. I'm a sucker for male pregnancies - and a dragon baby to boot! I wait patiently for the next installment. (If this is not the same athena that I know from LJ, I sincerely apologize. Still, I loved the story!)
Oh, BTW, I've beta-ed the first page of the first chapter. I plan to tackle the rest later (It's 1 AM here). Want me to email it?
Oh, BTW, I've beta-ed the first page of the first chapter. I plan to tackle the rest later (It's 1 AM here). Want me to email it?
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love dragons ^^ It will be fun to see were this story goes.
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Silly I kent Skifs name. Although now that I think of it... A log happened this chapter I assum things are about to get more interesting from here and that he's going to be better taken care of.
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a cute idea but your biggest problem is that it's a first draft. I know we all want to post our writings as soon as possible but very few poeple can do that. Most, like yourself, get a basic plot out and then rewrite and filter it into story.
It's the difference between text and story. You're telling us what happened not showing us. There's no emotion, no description no real body to it beyond the plot. I suggest staring again with the prologue and first chapter. Give your story life and build it up.
It's the difference between text and story. You're telling us what happened not showing us. There's no emotion, no description no real body to it beyond the plot. I suggest staring again with the prologue and first chapter. Give your story life and build it up.
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absoloutly fabulous! I love the dragon he is so sweet!!!!! Hope that he didn't hurt his mate. And hope the knights wont be a problem for him. I' absoloutly looking forward to the next part hope you update soon.
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love the 1 chapter. Very descriptive of the situation, please continue
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Very well constructed and entreteiment. Please contiue