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Please update sooon

I really love this please update soon and let me know when you do
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I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! Dragons that turn into sext hot humanoids and take cute human uke's to bare their younge....mmmmmmmm!!! BUT......I just want to say that I think you've made the dragons look a little too heartless (please don't hurt me) ummm....what I mean to say is that I think they should come off as a little more honourable...ie. they will kill and eat the knights only because they tried to harm them first. But they don't necessarily have to like it, and they don't kill innocent humans. The big one would be that I don't think you should say that they have killed their mates before....because honestly how can this dragon prove to his mate that he is trustworthy if he could potentially eat him XD. I think it would come off much better if you had it that they NEVER hurt their mates....they cherish them (contrary to what most humans would expect of such a "fearsome" beast). And since there are so few of them they are even more priceless....then the anger and keeping the knights prisoner would make more sense as the dragon is furious and wants to avenge his abused mate. These are just suggestions, and as I said before I do love this story I just thought this would make it a little more appealing as the dragon would come off as an amazing lover who honestly cares for his mate.....but has to win him over due to the prejudices of the humans. Keep up the amazing work.

I like this story. Please, keep writing! I can't wait for the next chapters. XD

As long as you have it all planed out. Oh and please don't take so long to update that was simple torture.

The chapter was good! >_< Thank for updating! :D I can't wait for more! :3 Can't wait to see what more happens to Skif :D

I love this story. It is hilarious. I never thought I would enjoy the idea of the bad guys getting eaten so much but I can't wait for Kieran to get rid of them. I love mpreg stories so I really can't wait for dragon smex and dragon babies. Hurray! Even if Kieran can't do the deed yet, he can still do nice things to Skif. How come Kieran is letting Skif get away? I am really looking forward to your next update.

this is great please keep going and i love mercedes i have most of her books

This is really good. I like the idea, but I do feel sorry for Skif. I hope you update soon :D

Awesome story!! Its very original, I love it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. XD