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for Dragon Bait

by athenaartisan

schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! :)
person jdbbrz27
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens this is a fascinating story. Skeif sounds so sweet and adorable and his dragon intrigues me. Thank you and I'll be waiting for the next part please update soon.
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! Poor Keiran.. he must be so frustrated but watching their relationship develop is too cute for words. Keep up the good work and update soon! =D
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The last sentence was the best! XD I can just picture Skif's face when he heard that Kieran is hungry. XD That was great! XD The whole chapter was great. :) And I'm so happy you're continuing the story!!!! Somehow everything I read and start to like isn't continued... :( So I'm very happy I have this chapter to enjoy. ;) I'm waiting for more! XD
person Kuromei
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I just love dragons! XD I love 'em more when they can turn into humans (or in Keiran's case, have a humanoid form. lol X3) And I'm glad Skif isn't going to be a cum bucket for a bunch of filthy knights anymore, but I worry that he's gonna have a heart attack before Keiran's growth phase is over.

Case in point, when Keiran goes to eat Sir Erik and his surviving buddies. That'd be prime time for some major-freaking out. XP

Anyway, I'm staying tuned to this. ^w^ See you next time! =D
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Athena san, this is soo cute ^__^
Please continue, yes? I will come back to read!
Suryallee =^.^=
person kylee123
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks so much for updating this story. Skif is cuter than ever. I don't think Kieran will make a good impression if he eats those Knights in front of Skif. I still think that he should eat them though - they deserve it for being such jerks to Skif. I think it is good that Skif will spend a little time with Kieran in his dragon form before he can turn into human shape. Then he will get to know Kieran in his true dragon state. I love this story. Please keep going. I think they make a great pair.
person mw0627
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please, I want more...update soon. Who doesn't love a story with dragons and gay men?
person kylee123
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am dying to read more of this story. It is so funny. Kieran is the coolest dragon ever.
person dino1
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting idea. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds. Please update soon.