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for Dragon Bait

by athenaartisan

schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAAWWWW...how cute. Skif totally has him wrapped around his little finger already. And Skif thinks he's the prisoner/pet. If only he knew.
person Qiana
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter thanks for updating
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol! Poor dragon won't know what hit him - its hard to resist such earnest pleading *huggles*`
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this tale and hope to see more chapters soon it is a bit choppy in places other wise well put together thank you for sharing it with those of us that are not very good at writing
person kylee123
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. Skif is such a sweetheart. He really has a pure spirit. I am glad that Kieran gave in to his request. However I don't think he should let the knights leave alive. They deserve to be punished or killed for all the times they raped and beat Skif. If someone treated my loved one like that, I would have to take revenge. Plus they sacrificed Skif to the dragon. They are already murderers. I get the feeling that if Kieran lets them go, they will be a thorn in his side forever. I am hoping they will move past the knights and get on with their relationship and hopefully some dragon babies.
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww super sweet chapter as for your beta add i may be able to help im not the best at English but i may be able to help your story be a bit smooth i rely like your story and if you need help then yeah ill try to do my best lol so hit me up of you need help and i like your story so i cant wait for another update.
person dutsada
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. So Skiff made a deal the Dragon can't refuse LOL. Can't wait.
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
9/7... Im on Kieran/Llyr's side! I think he should eat the knights... nothing good will come of releasing them and letting them live!!! they wont be grateful! thankful! respectful! as soon as they think the have an once of power they will be back to thier abusive a$$h*** behaviour again! ... plus isnt Kieran/Llyr REALLY hungry! with his growin spurt and all!?!

ofcourse i can see why Skif wants/thinks its best to release the knights... I dont think id be happy in his shoes knowing that nakkid stravin men were locked within my house...

person Enamoril
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwe Skif's despair is cute for some reason xD
person smint45
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! Thank you for the chappie!!! Finally Skif is a bit less skittish!!! Thats great!!!! And get a little understanding between the two of them!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!!