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for Dragon Bait

by athenaartisan

person Qiana
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter wonder what will happen when he goes in there to help the knights
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person jdbbrz27
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I finally got the time to read this I was so busy at work that it took a while but I knew you updated so I knew I had to read it and it didn't disappoint at all. Little Skif is so sweet and adorable the perfect carrier you'd have to be to carry for a dragon and hopefully fall in love with them. And Keiran to adorable for words I tell you strong and sensitive and sweet wow can I have him no that would take him away from Skif so I won't ask. I wish Skif would at least let Kieran eat Eric he deserves to suffer ALOT little shit head. The others are almost just as bad though but Eric has got to be the worst. And I'm with Kieran I can't wait for him to revert to his other form to can't wait for that should be awesome especially little Skif's reaction to it and their first night of love making another anticipating moment jeez so many of them. Thank you thank you thank you for sharing and I obviously can't wait for the next update.
person smint45
schedule December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! I can't wait for the month beeing over and for them to start talking to eachother!!! I want to see Kirans human form so badly!!! Hope you get to that part quikly!!! Thanks for the update and see you soon!!!
schedule December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
9/8 I still think the knights should be eaten.... they are a horrid lot... and would make better poo
anyways lookin forward to the grand opening... I suspect nothin good will come out
other than Skif learns to trust his dragon... and those humans are the real monsters!
person Loves to laugh
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving this, even if Skif should let Keiran take care of business and eat Erik. You know that fool will try and do something foolish and get himself eaten. Poor Keiran will probably get indigestion with such as jerk as him. :)
person kylee123
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes. Kieran truly is whipped. I am very eager to see what will happen once they go in to see the prisoners. I am glad that Kieran is showing Skif that he can be a good guy. Maybe this will help Skif to realize that it is his human masters who are the true monsters. I hope Kieran will get a little reward for being such a nice dragon mate to Skif.
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I love your story! I dont think I've read too many Dragon fics before, ever, and DEFINATLY not Yaoi (because I did read Katie MacAlaster, but honestly, yours is better, because yours isn't annoying, and hers are).

I Love it! -caugh- lol, anyway, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING THIS, IT'S AAMAZING!
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very sweet again and i will be holding my breath till the next update on this
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAWWWW...poor Kieran. Yeah, he is whipped. But that's ok. He's adorable that way. XD Thanks for the update. Can't wait for more.