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this story is getting really good!;) Is kieran going to be able to turn human soon? I can't wait to see what he looks like. I love dragons and yours is one of the very few good stories I've found on them. Keep it up!

That was great!!! Seems Lyrs growing surt comes to an end!!! I can't wait for him to take human form!!! I want to know what he looks like!!!! Hope that you will give us the next chappie soon!!!!
P.S: I really like that Skif is a bit less skipish in this chappie!!!

Three new chapters in a day, what a treat! I like to see how Kieran is being forced by his devotion to his carrier to act against his own brutal, uncaring nature. I hope that he can carry out his plan with the ogres, as those knights need to get a taste of what they did to Skif.

I look forward to reading more.

13/12
I feel for poor Skif... im terrified of highes... those rides at the amusment park like drop zone... *terror*

lol they're both so cute! ^__^ I love the ending where Skif is just basically ranting because of blind terror that he will be dropped and die. Anyways, i'm so happy there was a new chapter and I'll be waiting for more :)

14/13.... oooooo great the typical 'watch this' show-offness of most 20somethingish boys trying to impress their date...
cant wait to find out how skif reactes... he was dropped... which breaks a big dragon promise... but it all worked out... so he could go either way...

I really don't think the dragon should have an easy time getting together with Skif.

I really can't see Skif falling in love with a being that is essentially the same as the Knights who have abused him. Kieran seems to take great pleasure in torturing anything smaller and weaker then him, purely for his own entertainment. He naturally eats and kills innocent humans (farmers and villagers) and does so in the most painful and humiliating way possible simply to increase his own pleasure. He cares absolutely nothing for the pain and suffering he causes for everyone around him and does whatever he wants simply because he can. He plans to sleep with Skif, regardless of how the boy will feel about the whole affair and his wishes.

You write Kieran in a more up-beat and light tone, but I doesn't change the fact that he is the same as the Knights, doing whatever brings him the most pleasure and fun regardless of who it hurts and how much pain it causes in the process. Kieran would have eaten Skif in a heartbeat if he wasn't a carrier he could use, he seems to care nothing for beings which have no use for him, once again it is the same for the Knights which he hates. In future chapters, I would have Skif confront Kieran about this, it would add a shit load of drama.

The first.... Prologue if that's what it was, seemed rushed towards the end. Otherwise, it was interesting how you started off your story.

ROFL I'm currently reading chapter 2 and I can't help but tell you that you've got a real good sense of humor. ^o^ I'll bet that my stomach will be hurting by the time I'm done catching up to your chapters. Great writers like you are what makes me want to read.

Lets see... Chapter four has some words used in the wrong places. I know what you meant to spell with the word you had put wrong. ^ ^ I'm tempted fix all the errors and send it to you. Just that I don't know how to get it to you. You can contact me via the e-mail on my profile. And I'd love to beta for you if you currently don't have one. Other wise, off to the next chapter!!