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by athenaartisan

schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
15/14

skif should modify some of the horse harnesses/bridles to make himself a dragon harness... either for ontop like a rider... or underneather like a handglider...
person Kuromei
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's been so long since I've checked this story, but I'm kind of glad for it. So much cuteness! X3 From Skif, at least. And Kieran when he's not trying to eat a certain prick knight. XD And giving those bastards to the Ogres as slaves is perfect. Mwa ha ha~ X3

Oooh, I want another update already. @3@ I may have found two more when I came home from work, but I still want more. lol XD But I'm glad Skif has found his backbone. ^w^ That inner strength is what him makes him such a great character. X3 And I can't imagine what it's like for such a young, virile dragon to get a month-long case of blue balls. lmao XD I'm really looking forward to the day when Kieran can transform. X3

See you next time! ^w^
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Skif is showing his strength!!! XD Now things will be really interesting. Poor Kieran. XD He's totally whipped. XD
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love how quickly you update, haha! It's a nice surprise after returning from dreary classes. Skif is adorable and I love the true side of him sneaking out. The way that their relationship is developing is amazing. It isn't an instant relationship, but one that's built slowly that's trying to accommodate for both halves. I think that's my favorite thing about this story and your writing. You develop their relationship in such a natural way that I can easily see the strength in their growing bonds. Lovely chapters! Can't wait for more!
person dutsada
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, those knights deserve to die... Skiff is such a kind boy but i hope he'll come to understand that sometimes he needs to let go. Thanks for the double update!
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you sooooooo much for all those updates! I love how this story is progressing. Skif finally finding his old self is so refreshing to see. I just wish Kieran can finally talk to him soon. I'm starting to feel bad for the poor dragon. He's suffering from abstinence and Skif doesn't even realize that he is the cause of that suffering. Kieran might seriously lose his mind.
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kieran. With cute little Skif being served to him on a silver platter, celibacy really must suck! I hope his period of abstinence ends soon, though, and that he ends up figuring out a really good punishment for that bastard Erik.
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ch 10/9

aside from my still firm belief that Kieran should eat the knights... he hungry what with his growth spurt and all
another suitable punishment would be for him to open the prison and use the knights as target practice as he relieves himself with his scaley hand - give the knights a taste of what they served out often enough
person kaylez24
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The words a bit modern for the whole medieval thing, but I can live with it.
I like Kiernan and Skif, their interactions are what makes this story so interesting.
Kiernan's inner battle between his stomach and his growing affection are very funny.

Update soon.
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't think i've given a review for this story yet... Anyways, I love Kieran and his difficulties with Skif since he can't talk but most of all he's adorable when he turned into a mushy cute puddle by Skif! I can't wait for him to turn back into a human and smex Skif all up and gain his trust. I think the elves and ogres are a great idea! I really hope Kieran will find one and i'm glad that Skif is finally beginning to trust Kieran but oh my gawd. Someone PLEASE just j*cking kill Sir Erik already! I can't believe Skif doesn't hate him! Man... if I was Kieran I would have just eaten the stupid knight already or 'accidentally' push him off the cliff and let his broken body to rot! I'll use that rope and tie Skif up all nice and delicious so he wouldn't know what was going on!! Man.... HATE him.... PLEASE have him die in some way or other. The other knights are meh... they're ok but Sir Erik? HEEEEELLLL NOOO! Oh my god. PLEASE have him killed somehow in the future. Or if not killed think of the worst punish in the WORLD or something. Like have HIM be a slave and be raped and suffer! Poor Skif! I feel so bad for him. Sir Erik is the stupidest Knight in the world to talk to meanly to Skif! He should feel freakin LUCKY that Skif is still loyal to him after everything he's done but NOOOO he freakin wants to KILL Skif's family? Wow... just... wow... he better get what's coming to him! Anyways, LOVE the story and can't wait for more! ^___^

~milky