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i hope, n wait n hope n wait thAT THIS GOOD STORY (with how the plot flow and the char build)that the dear good author wont be leaving this story un-finished. beacuse for now its the only wip that i constantly checking, every day for the ud date, n almost 22 day of no good news i almost give up, but... but, i hope it wasnt the case,-the story is being abandon- i hope the writer is just, got RL blocking the writer to up date this soon. -i hope n wait n hope n wait-

So how much longer before he turns back to a human and will he ever let the knights go?

Can I Smack Kieran? Not a bright move from my favorite dragon. Started out good ... letting Skif get comfortable with flying by playing in the water and then what does he do ..DROPS SKIF!! after promising not to!! If they were already "together" I think Skif would say no smex for a month! As it is looks like K. may be in the "doghouse" for a bit with Skif .. serves him right. Sometimes Kieran just doesn't think. Love this story. Skif & Kieran's evolving relationship is so sweet,(dragon purring, scratching his scales, getting to know one another..sort of). Best yaoi dragon/human fic I've seen so far. Keep hose updates coming. SHould be reallyyy interesting when K. can change forms again, yes?

Wow you had an update flash!!! I just looked if you updated and I see 5 chappies!!!1 Thats so great!!! I really like the new skif and the trust that develops between them!!! And I'm so happie that skif didn't ran away when he had the chance!!!! I really Love this story!!! I can't wait to see Kierans human form and for them to get an actual conversation!!! And perhaps Kiran is able to locate an elf so that he can explain to skif that Kieran is his mate!!!! I really hope to see from you soon!!!!

Chapter 12 was awesome. I am finally catching up to all the chapters that you posted. I got so many laughs out of Kieran's attemts to communicate with Skif.

Chapter 13 was priceless. I laughed so hard my eyes watered. Poor Kieran got a little carried away with the acrobatics. It is the exact sort of thing that Kieran would do.

I loved all the new chapters. I love how close Llyr and Skif are getting. Now they just have to find a way to get rid of those darn knights. I still think that Eric should die. I am enjoying the story so much. I love the conversations between the two. I can't wait for Kieran to gain his human form again and finally tell Skif is real name. I would actually love to see some human/dragon smex. Maybe full intercourse is impossible but they could get creative. However I know I am quite the demanding pervert. I can't wait for the next chapter

They are cute ! I love them.
Thank you for your story,

a french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth

I love how much care you take in both developing these characters and smoothly moving the plot along. These past few chapters have done wonders for Skif's own vision of self and I can't wait to see what exactly you have planned next. I'm also highly anticipating Keiran's human appearance to Skif. That should definitely be something, neh? Anyway, wonderful job on these updates! I really enjoy your style and this story is just fascinating. Can't wait to see it continued!

Also, I noticed in the last chapter that you're looking for a beta. If you still are looking for one I would be more than happy to offer my services. If you have a regular fanfiction.net account, we could use the DocX program for editing. I find it's the easiest system to use with the other author I work with. Please drop me a line at FF.net if you're interested! My pen name there is also sayomi-chan.

Either way, keep up the fabulous work!

Wow, I must say, reading this has been a definite treat! I love Skif and Kieran and I love the obstacle you've laid out between them. There isn't the instant gratification of allowing them together, but a slow build-up that makes me really eager to see Kieran finally take on his humanoid form. I especially like Skif. Despite being abused and well, dominated for so long, I definitely consider him as a strong character. He's unique and interesting and I really want to see his reaction to Kieran when all is revealed. I can't wait for the next update! Great work!