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for Dragon Bait

by athenaartisan

schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your work as usual was brilliant and I really am glad that you have found someone to talk to the dragons carrier. Can't wait for the next chatpers.
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't speak for others, but I really like the pacing of the story! Yeah, I want some super steamy smexy fun but the way you've written the chapters is a lot more realistic and is very enjoyable to read. I was so excited when I saw a 2-chapter update and can't wait for the next one!
person dutsada
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update.. its been sometime... cant wait fro more... especially for keiran to turn human and for skiff to really know whta he really is...
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well first let me say that I love this story, and can't wait for more. Its torture having to wait for updates, but when you do they are more then worth the wait. Although they always leave me wanting more than I was before. I am waiting anxiously to see what awful thing Kieran is going to come up with for the Knights! Honestly it couldn't come fast enough for me, they are (Eric!!!!!) the most. . . . I can't even think of a word awful bad enough to describe them! Let it be horrific and gory, as well as last a hell of a long time. Its nothing less than what the rats deserve. Hopefully you will put poor Skif out of his misery and get rid of them soon, not sure I can stomach much more of this angst between him and Eric(the ignorant prick!). I am also waiting to see how the relationship progresses between Kieran and Skif, they need to hurry up and have some cute little dragon babies *grins* Ohhh~ will he give birth to them or is he gunna have an egg! Hahaha~ Although that seems to be a bit off I am still waiting on the edge of my seat for it. Well hopefully you will find time to help your loyal fans out of their misery and put farmville down for a few and post a few pages before you return to your addiction. *smiles hopefully* Looking forward to your newest installment! ~Casaface~
person Kuromei
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha haaaa~ Those knights don't know what they're in for. XD

I'm almost hoping they'll try for the weapons, too. Skif can't blame Kieran for killing them when they tried to kill the dragon first. Though something tells me that they'd try to hurt Skif before anything else. XP THEN Kieran's actions would be totally justified. lol X3

But, if the knights behave for once and they live, Kieran will have to go find those ogres. Oh well. *evil laugh*

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^w^
person kylee123
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would like for the knights to die too. The knights are taking up too much of the story. I would like the Knights to be gone so the story can move on to better things like meeting Kieran's family and mating and smex and babies.
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more of this!! I just read it from the beginning for the first time and I love it. There really need to be more good original fictions like this out there. Oh! This is the best line I read in months:

"It takes a special kind of arrogance to threaten the only person who is trying to save you and then demand them to help you."

I was nearly in stitches when I read that which was bad since it was 3AM and my husband was sleeping next to me while I read on my phone (smartphones rock!).
person WantSome
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Stumbled upon your story recently and have now caught up. Must have more, please! Update soon, k?
person Enamoril
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story; its like on the list of the top ten things I look at every day to see if there is anything updated/new in/on it. Skif makes me laugh, and Kieran makes me smirk and laugh.

I'm amazed Kieran hasn't tried to stealthily arouse the boy in his sleep, only to wake up with the same issue Kieran has been having every time the boy undresses. I'm thinking that he'd touch him with the smooth side of one of his talons...
person Arai565
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more :D