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for Daddy Issues

by touchstone85

person Solaris
schedule June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fuck yeah. That was very well written and delightful. You've
Got talent, my friend.
person torch
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, I'd love to see this develop at as a story - please continue!
person jeazard
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW, this was awesome, witha big helping of hot and a side dish of creepy. XD Loved it, a lot!
There will be more, right? RIGHT?
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was awesome ^_^ I love the whole Daddy thing; it's a kink of mine that people so rarely seem to write about. Really well written as well, I loved the whole build up. I also like how the whole hynosis/whatever thing wasn't really explained. A bit of mystery is always good in a story.

So, yes, very good job, I enjoyed it thoroughly ^_^
person Saminada
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! This is one of THE Hottest thing I've EVER read!!!! WOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!! :D

Plzzzzzzz MOOOOOREEEE!!!! *begs* At lest tell us what the hell Shaw is! Damn he's HOT! Wraor! *eats him up* lol

Thanks again for the hotness! I hope there'll be more! T___T
person sugargirl89
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I wasn't too sure if I would like it before, and I didn't. Instead I ablsolutely LOVED IT! I can't wait to see the Mayors reaction, and what if the boy gets his memory back, oh that will be interesting. Please write more, it was great!
person gillie
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! The slow build up to the sex, so hot!! Could there be more? Please? Anyway, thanks for a hot read.