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Glad Jason is beginning to get 'the rest of the story.'

Mark seems very wise...

A chapter with depth emotion and self explanatory. Gives us the meaning and the feelings of the relationship between Mark and his master.
I will love to read about the dinner time. I do not think Jason is trained in domestic chores or the etiquette to serve the table. Are you thinking that the master lay with his servants in the same table? Even though he is humanitarian and tender, I do not think is appropriate. But I think that maybe the slave's food is good cuality and they share a good time between them; using the example of Mark's room as very confortable
Fascinating, please continue. Your tale is expectacular.

Jason surprises me.

It's like he must be a little insane to keep fighting such overwhelming power. At least openly.

(And I never relax, hunny...)

Mark is a good boy and Jason looks interesting

I really enjoyed your fic, so far it is fantastic.
The reality is that, Katan, was not abusive. He simply forgot that the other was walking behind the car! (Mischievous smile from my).
Katan was too worried about Mark. I feel sorry for Mark. Not related to the matter and got some good hits.
Katan is powerful enough to keep the magic even if not focused on it, wow!. I think with Jason's feet so sore he should be silent. He want to walk up to the house? He don't realice that he is in real problem.
I'm sure that now the real training began. I think that much time will pass before they rely on Jason, or unless something more happens, that Jason saved his life, but I doubt. As you can see I really in to you tale.

I just love, how in the last chapter seems a perfect slave and then you realize it is only theater. Of all of Vessals which can be found have to be sadistic one that want to buy it, excellent! Here's the flip side of my love. I hope that the master will punish be a bit strong but nothing too severe. Or maybe more interesting wait to arrive to his state.

Whew - glad that Ketan came to the rescue... but Jason is now scarred? Oh dear.

I'd say relief is IN ORDER to hear Kataan.

I hadn't realized the meaning of the Vessels until this chapter. Strange stuff, indeed.

I really liked. The hood is sinister. It is very interesting, please continue

I love the beginning. Very smooth development. I'm intriging to kwon how he become a slave. Please conitue.