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for Something About Him

by RenegadeRaine

person Anon
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting so good! cant wait to read more!
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah - what a delightful chapter.

Just as you promised. I can understand everyone's point of view. Although I'm a little surprised Rayne (sp?) thought Katan over-reacted.

Aren't slaves - like dogs - supposed to behave? Especially when treated well?

Even as a clicker-trainer, I wouldn't overlook that. Though, of course, I'd never beat one of my dogs into submission

Still delightful!
person cee dee
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jason, he doesnt have it very easy. Sold, hurt and confused and no one really helping him- I like it- wish he had something to make it a little more even. I like it
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't Loose Yourself. Is Jason thinking of removing his leash??

For some reason, I'd been thinking a 'show slave' was a sex slave. Poor Mark - bet he thinks he's not pretty enough.

At first, I thought Mark wanted to be Katan's sex slave. Now... I'm not sure of his motivation. He must be jealous, though...

Looking forward to how the evening goes!

person skyblue100
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very good story
person kitty08
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow a really great story and I absolutely love it!!! please please update soon!!!
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So Jason caves for chocolate ;-))

Not quite as good a reason as being raped so badly you can hardly walk - and you've been betrayed by your uncle so you have nothing else to hope for.

But chocolate is good... And Mark is a good role model.
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this chocolate's chapter. Mark teasing. Really good.
person Avernion
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, if someone tried to buy me with chocolate, I'd say the candy gave me a horribel rash. Laugh. Poor J, he doesn't think reasonable at times. It was a fun idea though =^-^=
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK - you've convinced me. Katan is a softie.

And poor Mark is suffering as much as Jason.

Is Jason well and truly broken this time? I thought Katan could will any sort of punishment without the collar. But have the feeling the very humiliation of wearing it may do Jason in...