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September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job on this story! I like the characters and think you have thrown in some very interesting twist. I hope they find Jason's sister ok and his current treatment doesn't cause him to bend too much. I think if Katan can win his loyalty, he will find that Jason will be invaluable.
BTW, I think the chess scene several chapters ago was WAAY cool. I think you did wonders showing Jasons true potential with that chapter.
BTW, I think the chess scene several chapters ago was WAAY cool. I think you did wonders showing Jasons true potential with that chapter.
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September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just found your story and I'm beginning to fall in love with all your main characters. I can't wait to see how this story progresses. Sometimes I feel like it's going to slow, but then I realize that your attention to detail and story progression help to provide a strong picture. I just wish that your chapters were bigger! :) I can't wait until the next chapter and good luck writing!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update! What happened? It's been over a month! =( Pleasee I need to know what happens next.
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved very creative, very good.
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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How very clever. This Natalie knows her stuff.
And it's fascinating (at least to me) how a strong and independent person can be turned into a submissive, needy one. And end up loving the one who did it to him.
Looking forward to how the training continues...
And it's fascinating (at least to me) how a strong and independent person can be turned into a submissive, needy one. And end up loving the one who did it to him.
Looking forward to how the training continues...
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can´t wait for continuation
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is WAY too short!
Couldn't we at least see Jason naked and freezing to death????
Couldn't we at least see Jason naked and freezing to death????
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope Jason get seriously ill and Katan feels like crap because of it! Seriously, that man is mean!
Lol, done ranting! Great work!
Lol, done ranting! Great work!
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was a silent reader until now. Sorry! (My English's not really good, it's why)
But.....I don't want him to be broken. Please!!!!
I understand the logic behind this "situation" but what make Jason (and the story) interesting it's his personalty. If he lose his willpower...well it's not Jason anymore.
I don't hate Katan, I can see his point of view (I not approve), but I don't like him however.
I look forward the next update.
Gwen.
But.....I don't want him to be broken. Please!!!!
I understand the logic behind this "situation" but what make Jason (and the story) interesting it's his personalty. If he lose his willpower...well it's not Jason anymore.
I don't hate Katan, I can see his point of view (I not approve), but I don't like him however.
I look forward the next update.
Gwen.