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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello, just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed reading your story, I find it both intriguing and compelling. I can't wait for more xx
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this your doing a good job!
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February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope my review isn't to late for the deadline with the paysite! I have to say, I liked your story so much I read all 20 chapters for 3 hours straight =3 Please review soon! I can't wait for more =D
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January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
<3
J-chan
J-chan
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December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, been following this story for a while. This is the first time reviewing, and I have to say you've made me laugh, cry, gasp, whine, and totally addicted me to this story! I love the characters and hope to read more soon, I'm totally rooting for Katan and Jason!
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December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you let him out of that room! Can't wait for the next chapter! The vessels are really interesting characters.
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_o awesome and Jason gave it wooowz <3 it
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chpt 15. Very touching with the back story of the empty room. I think it will be interesting having Natalie around to help Mark ballance out some of the hotheaded protagonists.
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am very impressed with your story. The characters are likable and your plot twists and description of the setting makes this a very nice read, if a little short. Congradulations on your opportunity and I wish you luck and to be included on the update list. Keep it up!
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December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am very impressed with the contrasts you acheived with these first two chapters. You allowed us to see this world from two very different points of view and for a person who has never read Kira Takenuchi, this is very welcome. I was particularly taken with the shooting of the child. It imediately left no doubt as to how harsh the your world can be.
Katan and Jason sound like quite a firey pair, both salves in one way or another and both determined to be the master of their own fate. I'm to read more.
Katan and Jason sound like quite a firey pair, both salves in one way or another and both determined to be the master of their own fate. I'm to read more.