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First time I have ever reviewed on this site! This story has sucked me in completely. It's so hard to find a story on this site and in this category that actually has satisfying plot. I enjoy my smut, but dammit, I enjoy plot more! I do hope you maintain an frequent and consistent updating schedule. If you move to a pay site or will publish this for coin, I'd be very happy to buy!

I really like this story and can't wait for an update! It is interesting to see where you are taking this. Are you publishing on some other site as well or do you have a mailing list that alerts about updates? (Too bad this site hasn't got an alert system.)

This is such a cool story! Great world building :) I'm thoroughly addicted.

I loved this story and have read it several times. I hope one day to see more of it:)

Very interesting! Can't wait to find out about Jason's memoryblock!

Jesus, Yuli is a monster. I suppose living on the streets, becoming a slave and then doing his bosses "dirty" work would make him one. But to do that to a kid, a person he knew not too long ago; it's horrible.

I am glad that Jason's learning to accept his new life. It's interesting that his father, apparently very smart and wealthy? could have been killed b/c of his job, or what he knew? Maybe? Jason's past life is a mystery. I hope that Katan figures it out soon! And they should definitely remove that memory chip, won't that help Jason figure out where he came from?

Great, great story! I am so sorry I got to the last chapter! I hope you update soon! :)

Oh God. I'm on the verge of happy tears and dislike. Please tell me that this will have a happy ending? I hate slave stories that have a Master who breaks their pet when trying to train them. Or, when everyone is just plain pissy and traumatized. *sniffles* I have a love for both of them and I want them to be happy. TT_TT I especially want Mark to be happy. *makes a depressing sound*
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-Aaiya

I started reading this story a few weeks ago, then I lost track of it and I'm glad to see it was updated. I've been catching up on all the chapters. I'm on ch. 19 now and I must say this is an extremely well written story. I usually don't read stories about slaves b/c I don't believe in them; I think it's horrific to think of someone owning a slave and treating them as a non-human. There's one other slave story on here I found myself drawn to, so maybe AFF is breaking me! AFF seems to break me of all my "boundries". lol

Anyway, I just wanted to tell you this last chapter where Jason finally breaks down and pleads w/Katan to release him, broke my heart. You really know how to show a characters strength, weakness, pride and humility. Jason went through so many emotions during this period of "incarceration" and my heart broke for him.

I also wanted to commend you on your imagination! Vessels, healing vessels, hurting vessels, etc.; very creative! And that memory chip implanted in Jason's head; extremely interesting! I hope they can take that thing out soon!

Anyway, just wanted to write a quick note to tell you how much I'm enjoying this slave story! Ok, gotta go back and finish the rest of the chapters!

Oh, I almost forgot: please let me know if you're going to take this amazing story down and where I can finish reading it; I'd definitely pay to finish the story! LisaT25@msn.com

And CONGRATULATIONS to being published!!!!! :)

Please for the love of all that is holy and good, update soon.

I am emotionally involved, I kid you not. There were definitely parts where I squeed like a 15 year old fangirl, haha. This story is quite different than other slavery stories and I commend you on that. I'd also like to commend you on the idea of varying slave types. It seems in a lot of slavery stoies, there are 'arond the house' slaves and fuck buddies. I quite enjoyed the seperation of skill sets, it was refreshingly creative.

I also love your ability to keep it scientifically fantastical. You give and keep the idea of a different time and place. Usually, I tend to forget they are in an advanced year, or different planet, but you have kept the idea of Euphoria in my head.

I can say I absolutely adore the fact that there hasn't been any sex yet. I don't know any stories aside from this one where the master doesn't jump into bed with his newest aquisition. Instead, you develope character, you further plot, and you wait till the time is right. I know there will be some steamy sex scenes, and I eagerly await them, but I must applaud your abilty to keep tension rising, keep the plot moving, without using slave sex as a focal point.

Reading through the chapters I became so engrossed, and happening upon the chapter in which you might get chosen for a paysite, I got a little depressed, knowing that they'd be fools not to take you. My repect for you shot up quite a few degrees when you wrote that you denied them because they basically amounted to scam artists.

Your abilities as a writer and your moral compass, haha, have kept me reading, and I eagerly await more.

Just discovered your story... I did something I *never* do, I started it towards the end, I think chapter 17 or 18. Loved it. Now I have to go back to the beginning! I'm looking forward to seeing how the plot developed to the point that I began reading in the story.