rate_review Reviews

Good, wonderful plot but some of the grammar errors bugged me, plus I personally think their love for each other was unclear and didn't look too convincing to me. But I really liked this plot as well as the characters, they're very enticing, just hate how Vincent almost killed Nick, he should learn how to control his anger, like seriously, he's been alive for a while there. Although I didn't finish reading it, I can predict both of them are gonna end up happily ever after together, (hopefully!)

Extremely good. Awesome, really great.

Okay, first I have to say in general I like the story. But there are a few things that bothered me in the end. I know it is just a fictional story but the idea of the Nick and Vincent having passionate sex right after he has been brutally raped repeatedly to the point he was torn and bleeding is not realistic. Not to mention the mental state of a rape victim is not genreally one where he or she would likely want any sexual contact. I know you are not the original author but maybe the scene is something that should be reconsidered as you edit? Also the chapter transitions are choppy in some places.

Thanks again for helping me out. I love all your stories and now look forward to seeing what you have in store for Vincent/Nick. ~ Misty ~

I love this story and hope to see more of it. Please continue.

wow this is just amazing! i enjoyed this story in one sitting. i could not stop! and I can't wait to know what happens later! please continue with their story!