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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love soooo much
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it. More please.
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Good cliffhanger; I'll certainly be coming back.
This story has a lot of promise and potential. Keep it going!
This story has a lot of promise and potential. Keep it going!
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, this seems like an incredibly interesting concept and I can't wait for chapter two. Oh and btw...Ares sounds hot XD.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oohhh!
i love love loved it! :)
make number 2
PLEASE!
i love love loved it! :)
make number 2
PLEASE!
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great summary very catching. Nice first chapter too. Description was wonderful but not overly done. I look toward to reading more.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This seems really interesting.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start, I can't wait to read more!
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved how it began; enjoying the warmth of the strong yummy body next to his unknowingly! Thinking it was his dog, cause, who else would it be, eh? xD Surely not this Craig character he thinks of, pwsh of course not! I love how he was totally thrown through a loop, all WTF! His man sounds hot and Ares; what a cool name for the hunk. And the expression, 'like something out of a book', that was just great! I love the beginning and can't wait to find out what is going to happen!
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am completely and utterly interested. i like where this is going.