rate_review Reviews

Yep... still reading it. As a matter of fact, been checking almost daily for an update. Glad to see you've decided to carry on. Love the story.

YES YES YES YES YES YES YEEEEEEEEEES!!!!!! It's been updated!!!!!! And is it just be or is it getting incredibly hot in there!!!!!!! I LOVE these kinds of lovers, the kind that would be scary in real life but are perfectly acceptable in fiction. I'm sorry to hear that you're having trouble with wanting to write anything, I've read all your fics and they are really different/interesting/HOT!!/cool. Please please please find it in your heart to write at least one more sex scene...! LOL Reading this chapter made my day!

Woah. This is hot and fascinating at the same time. Craig and Adreyn's break-up hurts my poor little fuzzy heart, but I'll survive. Ares is such a hoot! I'm loving this. Is Adreyn crazy or is something else (crazy, but not in-Adreyn's-head-crazy) going on? I can't wait to find out! This is such a great idea, so creative. I hope you can get inspired to work on this a lot more. It's so good and I must know what's going to happen further on. What makes Ares disappear? Does he disappear and appear on his own will? Can Adreyn change him so easily just by things he writes? Will he try to? Will it fail and just annoy Ares? *squirming in her seat at all the possibilities!*

love this story, totally fan of yours
sweet charecter waiting for more dear!

So glad you're updating this! This is a cute story. So, is Adreyn (did I spell that right?) like losing his mind, conjuring up a Greek God just because he's lonely and heartbroken? Or is this guy for real?

Interesting story, looking forward to the next chapter! Maybe now you'll be on an updating roll! lol (with your other stories, I mean!)

This story shows great potential. I mean, you made Adreyn's personality realistic, and Ares is also interesting(heheheh). Dialogue doesn't seem contrived or anything; you made it flow smoothly and naturally. And lastly? No major grammer and spelling errors. At least, I didn't notice any. I look forward to future updates!
(And if you make Adreyn schizophrenic, I will torture you - in my mind.)

Noooo, neein I want moreXD dang itXD wahhaahah he really thinks he has lost it doesn't he? Anyways please update soon! you own, your writing style ownsXD and I'm a big fan of yoursXD please update soon~

This is really good, it would be awesome if you updated more, though I guess everyone has things to do. =D

Very interesting story. I am really enjoying it. I think that if Ares is a fantasy then Andreyn should enjoy that fabulous Adonis for as long as he possibly can.

hahahahaha I dont think it would take me that long to recognize one of my own characters!